Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific about the rules.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear skirts instead of trousers, and girls are required to tie their hair up rather than leaving it down. These rules are meant to maintain a neat appearance.

제안: Try to answer the question even if you are unsure about some words. You can ask for clarification briefly but then attempt to give your opinion. This shows your ability to communicate effectively.

예시: I'm not sure what 'benefit' means exactly, but I think having more rules could help students behave better and focus more on their studies.

제안: Avoid using informal or rude language. Instead, express your opinion politely and provide reasons or examples to support your answer. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I don't think my English teacher is very effective because she often makes mistakes and doesn't explain things clearly, which makes it hard for me to learn.

× Yes, there is.

✓ Yes, there are.

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× I think the rule is to wear skirts.

✓ I think the rule is to wear a skirt.

The word 'rule' is singular, so it should be followed by 'a skirt' (singular) to maintain agreement.

× And you have to not put down your hair.

✓ And you must not let your hair down.

The phrase 'put down your hair' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'let your hair down' meaning to relax or loosen hair.

× You have to make, you have to put your hair up and don't make it up.

✓ You have to put your hair up and not style it.

The phrase 'make it up' is unclear and incorrect in this context; 'style it' better conveys the intended meaning of arranging hair.