Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and does not directly respond to the question. You should provide a clear and direct answer about whether there are rules at your school, followed by brief supporting details if necessary. Avoid asking questions back to the examiner as it can disrupt the flow.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school to ensure discipline and safety. For example, students must wear uniforms and attend classes on time.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by using clearer linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid redundancy such as 'confine limits'. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details connected logically.

예시: I believe that while some students benefit from having more rules because it provides structure, others may feel restricted. Therefore, it's important to balance rules to encourage creativity without causing too many limitations.

제안: Your answer starts well but ends abruptly and lacks coherence. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid filler words like 'actually' repeatedly and provide specific examples to support your opinion.

예시: Yes, I have a teacher who was my mentor during my MFA studies in the United States. She was very responsible and talented, always providing helpful feedback that improved my work significantly.

× You mean my school in China or in the United States or in the Germany?

✓ You mean my school in China or in the United States or in Germany?

The definite article 'the' is not used before country names like 'Germany'. It is only used with some country names that are plural or include words like 'states' or 'kingdom'. Therefore, 'in Germany' is correct, not 'in the Germany'.

× Really depends on the students, the individuals themselves, their personalities.

✓ It really depends on the students, the individuals themselves, and their personalities.

The original sentence lacks a subject, making it incomplete. Adding 'It' as the subject and including 'and' before the last item improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× But sometimes too many rules can really confine limits students imaginations I think.

✓ But sometimes too many rules can really confine or limit students' imaginations, I think.

The phrase 'confine limits' is incorrect; 'confine' and 'limit' are separate verbs and should be connected properly. Also, 'students imaginations' needs a possessive apostrophe to become 'students' imaginations'. Adding a comma before 'I think' improves readability.