Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“they talking in class is prohibited”应为“talking in class is prohibited”。建议注意主谓一致和句子结构，避免重复表达。可以使用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to bring digital devices like smartphones because they can be distracting. Moreover, talking during class is prohibited to ensure that everyone can concentrate when the teacher is speaking.

제안: 回答表达不清晰且有语法错误，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

예시: No, I don't think having more rules would benefit students. Too many rules can make students feel stressed and less relaxed at school, which may negatively affect their ability to concentrate on studying.

제안: 回答中存在多处语法错误和表达不完整，句子不连贯，影响理解。建议注意时态一致，句子完整，避免重复词汇，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She was my middle school English teacher and is very caring. Whenever I had problems, she would always find time to help me solve them. Additionally, she is very knowledgeable and teaches us effectively, which helped me improve my English skills.

× Additionally, they talking in class is prohibited to ensure everyone can concentrate when the teacher is speaking.

✓ Additionally, talking in class is prohibited to ensure everyone can concentrate when the teacher is speaking.

句子中“they talking”结构错误，动词“talking”前不应有主语“they”，应直接使用动名词“talking”作主语。

× Firstly, students can't bring the digital device like smartphones to school and they can't because it will distract them.

✓ Firstly, students can't bring digital devices like smartphones to school because they will distract them.

句中“and they can't”重复且不必要，应删除以避免冗余。

× Firstly, students can't bring the digital device like smartphones to school and they can't because it will distract them.

✓ Firstly, students can't bring digital devices like smartphones to school because they will distract them.

“digital device”应使用复数形式“digital devices”，因为后面举例“smartphones”是复数。

× many rules will make students feel more stressful so that they can't feel relaxed and unwind when they're in the schools, so that they can't concentrate themselves on study, and they will focus more on the rules to make them don't.

✓ Many rules will make students feel more stressed so that they can't feel relaxed and unwind when they're in school, so they can't concentrate on their studies, and they will focus more on the rules instead.

“stressful”形容事物，“stressed”形容人感受；“schools”前不加冠词且应为单数“school”；“concentrate themselves on study”表达不当，应为“concentrate on their studies”；“make them don't”结构错误，改为“instead”更通顺。

× When I have some problems she will always find it and help me to solve it.

✓ When I have some problems, she will always find them and help me to solve them.

“problems”是复数，代词应使用复数“them”而非单数“it”。

× And also her she is very knowledgeable and teach us well.

✓ And also, she is very knowledgeable and teaches us well.

句中“her she”重复，且主语应为“she”；动词“teach”应加第三人称单数形式“teaches”。

× It was my middle school English teacher and she is very very caring teacher.

✓ She was my middle school English teacher and she was a very caring teacher.

前半句用过去时“was”，后半句描述过去的状态也应使用过去时“was”；“very very”重复，改为“very”即可。

× What he taught will ask made us have a.

✓ (该句不完整，建议删除或重写以表达完整意思。)

该句语法结构混乱且不完整，无法理解其含义，建议重写或删除。