Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 다소 중복되고 불필요한 말이 포함되어 있어 자연스럽지 못합니다. 문장을 간결하게 구성하고, 문법적 오류를 줄이며, 명확한 주제 문장과 구체적인 세부사항을 포함하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Yes, my school has several rules. One unique rule is that we don't have exams in math classes, but attendance and punctuality are strictly enforced to encourage discipline.

제안: 답변이 주제에 직접적으로 답하고 있으나, 반복되는 단어와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 연결어를 활용해 문장을 더 자연스럽고 논리적으로 만들고, 어휘 선택을 다양화하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: No, I don't think more rules would help. While some rules help students adjust to school life, too many can restrict their freedom and negatively affect their experience.

제안: 답변이 명확하고 구체적이지만, 반복되는 단어와 시제 일관성 문제, 그리고 문장 연결이 다소 부족합니다. 다양한 어휘를 사용하고, 시제를 일관되게 유지하며, 문장 간 연결어를 활용하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Yes, I have had several excellent teachers. For example, Susan, my English teacher, always carefully corrected my grammar and helped me form correct sentences when I spoke. She was the best teacher I have ever had.

× one rule that are, uh, way different from any other school is that, umm, we have to take a math during this master.

✓ one rule that is, uh, way different from any other school is that, umm, we have to take math during this semester.

'Rule' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'a math' is incorrect because 'math' is an uncountable noun and does not need an article. 'Master' is likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'semester'.

× we have to take a math during this master.

✓ we have to take math during this semester.

'Math' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'master' should be corrected to 'semester' to fit the context.

× So you need to be, uh, attendance and punctual.

✓ So you need to have attendance and be punctual.

'Attendance' is a noun and cannot be used with 'be' in this context. The correct expression is 'have attendance'. Also, 'punctual' is an adjective and needs the verb 'be' before it.

× some rules are are definitely helping students be adaptable to student life and their study.

✓ some rules are definitely helping students be adaptable to student life and their studies.

'Study' should be pluralized to 'studies' to correctly refer to the academic activities of students.

× excessive rules may umm defer their freedom so they can hinder their student life.

✓ excessive rules may umm defer their freedom and hinder their student life.

The conjunction 'so' is incorrectly used here; 'and' better connects the two negative effects of excessive rules.

× Yes, I had some teachers who did their job very well.

✓ Yes, I have had some teachers who have done their job very well.

The present perfect tense 'have had' and 'have done' is more appropriate to indicate experience up to now.

× She did a great job at checking my grammar and formulating correct sentences while I am speaking in English.

✓ She does a great job checking my grammar and formulating correct sentences while I am speaking in English.

The present tense 'does' fits better as the teacher's job is ongoing. Also, 'at checking' should be 'checking' without 'at'.