Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural by using correct prepositions and verb tenses, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and clear within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library on weekends, usually once a week. I enjoy reading books and magazines there because it refreshes my mind. Going to the library is easy and relaxing for me.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically. Also, try to provide specific details about your activities in the library and avoid vague expressions. Correct grammar and sentence structure will improve your response.

예시: Usually, I visit the adult section to find new books. Besides reading, I check the library's notice board to learn about upcoming events. I enjoy reading interesting and fantastic stories there.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases. Try to use past tense consistently and express your ideas clearly. Also, use linking words to connect sentences and provide specific details about your childhood library visits.

예시: When I was a kid, I didn't spend much time in the library. However, I used to visit it once or twice a week to look at picture books. I especially enjoyed flipping through books with curious pictures, like those about puppets.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Avoid filler phrases like 'I think' repeatedly. Provide a clear opinion supported by specific examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and concise.

예시: Although I don't know much about Chinese culture, I believe many Chinese children visit the library regularly. For instance, schools usually have libraries where each student can borrow a book for a week. This encourages children to enjoy reading and visit the library often.

× Yes, I go to library very often, like after a week on weekends.

✓ Yes, I go to the library very often, like once a week on weekends.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'after a week' is unclear; 'once a week' is the correct expression to indicate frequency.

× I used to go library, like to read and to find some magazines on a daily life.

✓ I used to go to the library, like to read and to find some magazines in daily life.

The phrase 'go library' is missing the preposition 'to' and the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'on a daily life' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in daily life'.

× And I love reading books because it entertained my mind.

✓ And I love reading books because it entertains my mind.

The verb tense should be present tense 'entertains' to agree with the present tense 'love'. Also, 'it' refers to reading books, which is singular, so third person singular verb is needed.

× It gives me a fresh feels.

✓ It gives me a fresh feeling.

'Feels' is a verb or plural noun; here, the correct noun form is 'feeling' to express the sensation.

× It's a piece of cake for me to go library.

✓ It's a piece of cake for me to go to the library.

The phrase 'go library' is missing the preposition 'to' and the definite article 'the' before 'library'.

× I go to the adult section in the library, then I find some new books.

✓ I go to the adult section in the library, then I find some new books.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I see for the additional books that came new in the library and that I see for the events like what's going on in the library.

✓ I look for the additional books that are new in the library and I look for events like what's going on in the library.

The verb 'see for' is incorrect; the correct phrasal verb is 'look for'. Also, 'came new' should be 'are new' to indicate current status.

× Yeah, I read something like interesting, fantastic in the library that seems to be very.

✓ Yeah, I read something interesting and fantastic in the library that seems very good.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Adding 'and' connects adjectives properly, and completing the sentence with 'very good' clarifies the meaning.

× When I was a kid, I don't want a lot of time in the library.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't want to spend a lot of time in the library.

The sentence refers to past time, so 'don't want' should be 'didn't want'. Also, 'a lot of time' needs a verb like 'to spend' to complete the meaning.

× But yes, in the week, one or two days in the library, I used to see a lot of picture books when I was a kid and just turning the pages around to see the most curious pictures, like a puppet box there.

✓ But yes, during the week, one or two days in the library, I used to see a lot of picture books when I was a kid and just turned the pages around to see the most curious pictures, like a puppet box there.

'In the week' is better expressed as 'during the week'. Also, 'turning' should be past tense 'turned' to match 'used to see'.

× Put the Chinese kids like, I don't know much about the Chinese culture, but I think they go to the library.

✓ About Chinese kids, I don't know much about Chinese culture, but I think they go to the library.

'Put the Chinese kids like' is unclear and incorrect. Rephrasing to 'About Chinese kids' clarifies the subject.

× Everybody goes to the library like in two or three days in a week or they enjoy the library.

✓ Everybody goes to the library two or three days a week or they enjoy the library.

The phrase 'like in two or three days in a week' is awkward; 'two or three days a week' is the correct expression.

× For example, in the schools they have library where every child get one book for one week.

✓ For example, in schools they have a library where every child gets one book for one week.

'In the schools' should be 'in schools' for generalization. 'Library' needs the indefinite article 'a'. 'Child' is singular, so verb should be 'gets'.

× I think they go to like.

✓ I think they go there regularly.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'there regularly' completes the thought.