Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons with linking words to make your response coherent and natural. Avoid repeating the same word multiple times and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because I find it difficult to study in complete silence at home. Moreover, the library environment motivates me to focus better. For example, being surrounded by other students studying encourages me to concentrate and be productive.

제안: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and a bit unclear at the end. Provide a clear topic sentence and then add specific details using linking words to explain what you study and why. Avoid trailing off and ensure your sentences are complete and natural.

예시: Usually, I study articles related to my major, chemical engineering, in the library. I also keep up to date with the latest research on renewable energy. This helps me deepen my knowledge and stay informed about new developments in my field.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but is fragmented and lacks fluency. Use a clear topic sentence and then explain your reason with linking words. Make sure your sentences are complete and natural, avoiding pauses or incomplete thoughts.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because it was too far from my home. Therefore, it was difficult for me to visit regularly. Instead, I used to read books at home or school.

제안: It's good to be honest, but try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and give a more confident and structured answer. Start with a clear opinion, then support it with reasons or examples using linking words. This will make your answer sound more natural and effective.

예시: I am not entirely sure, but I believe many Chinese children do go to the library. This is because education is highly valued in China, and libraries provide a good environment for learning at any age.

× Yes as I prefer I can't study in silence place and I prefer go to library and get some emotion like motivation, motivation, motivation and motivation get some motivation for a study.

✓ Yes, as I prefer, I can't study in a silent place and I prefer to go to the library and get some emotion like motivation, motivation, motivation and motivation to get some motivation for studying.

The adjective 'silence' is incorrectly used; it should be the adjective 'silent' to describe the place. Also, the verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' before the verb 'go'. The phrase 'for a study' is incorrect; it should be 'for studying' to indicate the activity.

× Yes as I prefer I can't study in silence place and I prefer go to library and get some emotion like motivation, motivation, motivation and motivation get some motivation for a study.

✓ Yes, as I prefer, I can't study in a silent place and I prefer to go to the library and get some emotion like motivation, motivation, motivation and motivation to get some motivation for studying.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.

× Honestly, I go to library for studying some articles about my major and latest knowledge in chemical engineering or renowned energy and.

✓ Honestly, I go to the library to study some articles about my major and the latest knowledge in chemical engineering or renowned energy.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific place. Also, 'latest knowledge' needs the definite article 'the' to specify particular knowledge.

× Honestly, I go to library for studying some articles about my major and latest knowledge in chemical engineering or renowned energy and.

✓ Honestly, I go to the library to study some articles about my major and the latest knowledge in chemical engineering or renowned energy.

The phrase 'for studying' is less natural here; 'to study' is the correct infinitive form to express purpose.

× Honestly, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because it was. It has a long way to library and I couldn't go there.

✓ Honestly, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because it was far away and I couldn't go there.

The phrase 'it was. It has a long way to library' is incorrect and incomplete. The correct expression is 'it was far away' to indicate distance. Also, 'to library' needs the definite article 'the'.

× Honestly, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because it was. It has a long way to library and I couldn't go there.

✓ Honestly, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because it was far away and I couldn't go there.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× Honestly, I don't have any knowledge about this topic, but umm, as you know, the Chinese kids are very clever, so I think so. They go to the library at any age.

✓ Honestly, I don't have any knowledge about this topic, but umm, as you know, Chinese kids are very clever, so I think so. They go to the library at any age.

The phrase 'the Chinese kids' is incorrect when speaking generally about a group; 'Chinese kids' without 'the' is appropriate for general statements.