Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit long and slightly unclear in parts. Try to make your response more concise and structured by directly answering the question first, then adding supporting details with linking words. Also, avoid redundancy like repeating 'so'.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library. For example, while preparing for my competitive exams, I studied there regularly. Currently, during my PhD, I visit the library after my college lectures to study.

제안: Your answer has repetition and lacks clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases. Also, be more specific about what you revise or study in the library.

예시: In the library, I usually read newspapers or revise the topics I have studied in my lectures to strengthen my understanding.

제안: Your answer is short and direct, which is good, but the sentence structure can be improved for naturalness. Use a more natural negative form and add a little detail to enrich your answer.

예시: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I preferred reading books at home.

제안: Your answer is uncertain and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and avoid unnecessary phrases. Also, use correct prepositions and grammar.

예시: I think many Chinese kids often go to the library, but I am not very sure since I am from India.

× So while preparing for my competitive exam, I used to study in the library only and then after that I started working.

✓ So while preparing for my competitive exam, I used to study only in the library and then after that I started working.

The sentence has a word order issue affecting clarity rather than a direct past tense error. The phrase 'study in the library only' is better expressed as 'study only in the library' to clearly indicate exclusivity. The past tense 'used to study' and 'started' are correct here.

× But now as I'm posting my PhD that time after my college lectures hours I go to the library to study.

✓ But now, as I'm pursuing my PhD, I go to the library to study after my college lecture hours.

The original sentence mixes tenses and has awkward phrasing. 'Posting my PhD' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'pursuing my PhD'. Also, 'that time after my college lectures hours' is unclear and should be 'after my college lecture hours'. The present continuous 'I'm pursuing' fits the current ongoing action, and simple present 'I go' is appropriate for habitual action.

× In the library I usually either read newspaper or brush up my brush up my things, whichever I have studied in the class lecture.

✓ In the library, I usually either read the newspaper or brush up on the things I have studied in the class lectures.

The phrase 'brush up my brush up my things' is repetitive and incorrect. The correct expression is 'brush up on' something. Also, 'whichever I have studied' is better expressed as 'the things I have studied'. Adding 'the' before 'newspaper' is necessary as it refers to a specific item. The conjunction 'either...or' is used correctly but the sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× No, I used to not go to the library when I was kid.

✓ No, I did not use to go to the library when I was a kid.

The phrase 'used to not go' is less common and awkward; the correct negative form is 'did not use to go'. Also, 'when I was kid' is missing the article 'a' before 'kid'. The past tense is correctly indicated by 'did not use to'.

× I feel yeah, they might go off in the library, but I don't have any much of A knowledge about it because I'm an Indian.

✓ I feel yeah, they might go to the library, but I don't have much knowledge about it because I'm an Indian.

The phrase 'go off in the library' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'go to the library'. Also, 'any much of A knowledge' is incorrect; it should be 'much knowledge'. Articles and quantifiers are corrected accordingly. The sentence is now clearer and grammatically correct.