Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear in parts. Try to make your response more concise and structured by stating your main idea first, then providing specific details. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'when I will I have class.' Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences for clarity.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library, usually twice a day. I visit in the morning if I don't have classes, otherwise I go in the evening. I enjoy studying there because it is quiet and has many resources.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more natural. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I usually' and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, specify what kind of books or resources you use to enrich your answer.

예시: In the library, I usually read books related to my studies and search for information online using the digital resources available. This helps me gather additional materials for my assignments.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details. Avoid grammatical errors like 'used to a kit' and incomplete sentences. Keep your answer concise and coherent.

예시: No, I did not go to the library as a child because there was no library in my community. Instead, I studied at home with my parents and played with my friends.

제안: Your answer is vague and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear opinion supported by specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid redundancy like 'love to read books and love to read.'

예시: Although I am not very familiar with Chinese children, I believe many of them have access to libraries in their communities. Generally, Chinese kids enjoy reading books, which helps them learn and grow.

× I go to the library when I don't have class, but when I will I have class.

✓ I go to the library when I don't have class, but when I have class.

The use of 'will' in 'when I will have class' is incorrect because in English, the present simple tense is used in time clauses referring to the future. Therefore, 'when I have class' is correct.

× I go to the library in the evening part or in the in the morning.

✓ I go to the library in the evening or in the morning.

The phrase 'in the evening part' is incorrect; 'in the evening' is the correct expression. Also, the repetition 'in the in the morning' is redundant and should be simplified to 'in the morning'.

× But in the morning part it depends on when I will have class.

✓ But in the morning it depends on when I have class.

Similar to the previous future tense issue, 'when I will have class' should be 'when I have class' because present simple is used in time clauses referring to the future.

× I usually do in the library.

✓ I usually study in the library.

The sentence lacks a direct object or verb complement after 'do'. 'Do' is a general verb and needs an object or should be replaced with a more specific verb like 'study' to make the sentence complete and meaningful.

× I usually read books and even I search some resources in the Internet because the library contains some digital library too.

✓ I usually read books and even search some resources on the Internet because the library contains a digital library too.

The correct preposition with 'Internet' is 'on' not 'in'. Also, 'some digital library' should be 'a digital library' to indicate a singular noun.

× I read and I study in the library for getting additional resources.

✓ I read and study in the library to get additional resources.

The phrase 'for getting' is awkward; 'to get' is the correct infinitive form to express purpose.

× When I used to a kit, I didn't have a library in my community, so I didn't use library in my childhood time.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't have a library in my community, so I didn't use a library in my childhood.

'Used to a kit' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'was a kid'. Also, 'use library' needs an article 'a' before 'library'. 'In my childhood time' is better expressed as 'in my childhood'.

× My parents have been helping me to work in the library, but I.

✓ My parents have been helping me to work in the library, but I...

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. No correction can be made without additional context.

× I am not familiar with Chinese kids what they do and they are in their childhood, but from my theoretical knowledge I think they have the capacity to get a library in their community and most of the Chinese kid love to read books and love to read.

✓ I am not familiar with what Chinese kids do in their childhood, but from my theoretical knowledge, I think they have access to a library in their community and most Chinese kids love to read books.

The phrase 'Chinese kids what they do and they are in their childhood' is ungrammatical; it should be 'what Chinese kids do in their childhood'. 'Capacity to get a library' is awkward; 'access to a library' is better. 'Most of the Chinese kid' should be 'most Chinese kids' for correct plural usage.