Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors such as 'hadn't went' instead of 'hadn't gone' or 'haven't gone'. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'go to the library' unnecessarily. Try to make your answer more concise and natural by directly answering the question and providing clear reasons with proper tense usage.

예시: I didn't use to go to the library, but now I visit it three times a week because I'm preparing for my RS exam and need a quiet place to focus on my studies.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear, especially the phrase 'start to painting some oars' which seems incorrect or irrelevant. Also, the sentence ends abruptly. Try to give a complete, clear answer with relevant activities you do in the library, and use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Usually, I study my English lessons in the library. Sometimes, I listen to music while studying to help me concentrate, and I usually stay there for a couple of hours.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains minor grammatical errors such as 'didn't let me to go out lonely' which should be 'didn't let me go out alone'. Also, 'study my lesson on the table' is vague; specify where you studied. Try to use linking words to improve flow.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because my mother didn't let me go out alone. Instead, I used to study at the table at home.

제안: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing, such as 'go to library lonely' instead of 'go to the library alone'. Also, avoid making assumptions about a whole society without clear evidence. Try to express your opinion more clearly and politely, and use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: I'm not sure, but I think Chinese kids don't often go to the library because cities are crowded and parents may worry about their safety. If I were a parent, I might also be cautious about letting my child go alone.

× No, actually I hadn't went to the library in the past.

✓ No, actually I hadn't gone to the library in the past.

The past perfect tense requires the past participle form of the verb. 'Went' is the simple past form, while 'gone' is the past participle of 'go'. Therefore, 'hadn't gone' is correct.

× But nowadays I'm studying for my Rs exam so I need to go to library and study my lesson focus.

✓ But nowadays I'm studying for my Rs exam so I need to go to the library and study my lesson focus.

When referring to a specific place like 'library', the definite article 'the' is required before the noun.

× So I went to the library 3 days in a week.

✓ So I go to the library 3 days a week.

The question asks about habitual action, so the present simple tense 'go' is appropriate. Also, 'in a week' should be 'a week' to express frequency.

× Go to the library.

✓ I go to the library.

This is a sentence fragment missing the subject. Adding 'I' completes the sentence.

× Generally I study my English lessons and sometimes I start to painting some oars and listening to music and I stay in library for.

✓ Generally I study my English lessons and sometimes I start painting some hours and listening to music and I stay in the library for a while.

'Start to painting' is incorrect; it should be 'start painting' (verb + -ing form). 'Some oars' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'some hours' fits better. Also, 'in library' needs the definite article 'the'. The sentence was incomplete, so 'for a while' is added for clarity.

× No, no, because when I was a kid, my mother didn't let me to go out lonely, so I couldn't go to the library, but I used to study my lesson on the table.

✓ No, no, because when I was a kid, my mother didn't let me go out alone, so I couldn't go to the library, but I used to study my lessons at the table.

'Didn't let me to go' should be 'didn't let me go' because 'let' is followed by the base verb without 'to'. 'Lonely' is an adjective describing feelings, 'alone' is correct for being by oneself. 'Lesson' should be plural 'lessons' to match context. 'On the table' should be 'at the table' for location.

× I don't know but I think no because the Chinese society is very crowded and the kids are not safe to go to library lonely.

✓ I don't know but I think no because Chinese society is very crowded and the kids are not safe to go to the library alone.

'The Chinese society' is better as 'Chinese society' without 'the'. 'To go to library' needs 'the library'. 'Lonely' is incorrect here; 'alone' is the correct adverb to describe being by oneself.

× So if I was Chinese, I don't let my kid to go to the library.

✓ So if I were Chinese, I wouldn't let my kid go to the library.

In conditional sentences contrary to fact, 'if I were' is correct (subjunctive mood). 'Don't let' should be 'wouldn't let' to match the conditional. 'Let' is followed by the base verb without 'to', so 'let my kid go' is correct.