Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and slightly unnatural. Try to avoid repeating words like 'iPad' twice and use more natural expressions. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of saying 'I actually don't have the time to go to the library to search for my information that I needed,' you can say 'I usually don't have time to visit the library, so I use my devices to find information.'

예시: No, I don't go to the library often because my schedule is very busy as a high school student. Usually, I use my iPad or iPhone to search for information and sometimes read e-books.

제안: Your answer has some unclear parts and minor grammar mistakes. For example, 'finish my text, finish my Pvt.' is confusing. Try to be more specific and clear. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid listing activities without clear structure. For example, you can say 'If I go to the library, I usually read books or study because it's quiet. Sometimes, I also enjoy chatting with friends over coffee.'

예시: If I have time to visit the library, I usually read books or study there because it's a quiet place. Sometimes, I also enjoy having coffee and chatting with my friends.

제안: Your answer is quite detailed but has some grammar errors and redundancy. For example, 'doing some things that kids do like playing hide and seek' can be simplified. Also, avoid repeating words like 'we are' twice. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, 'When I was a kid, I often went to the nearby library to do my homework. Sometimes, my friends and I quietly played hide and seek there.'

예시: Yes, I went to the library often when I was a child because it was very close to my home. I usually did my homework there, and sometimes my friends and I quietly played hide and seek in the library.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. For example, 'One of my friend' should be 'One of my friends,' and 'We are more prefer' should be 'We prefer.' Also, avoid repeating 'we're not' twice. Try to use linking words to improve coherence. For example, 'Although some people think Chinese kids love reading, in fact, many prefer playing outside in playgrounds.'

예시: That's an interesting question. Some people think Chinese children enjoy reading a lot, but actually, many prefer playing outside in playgrounds like other kids.

× No, not quite often.

✓ No, not very often.

The phrase 'not quite often' is incorrect because 'quite' is not typically used with 'often' to express frequency. The correct quantifier here is 'very' to indicate low frequency, so 'not very often' is appropriate.

× I actually don't have the time to go to the library to search for my information that I needed.

✓ I actually don't have the time to go to the library to search for the information that I need.

'Information' is an uncountable noun and does not require 'my' in this context. Also, 'that I needed' should be present tense 'that I need' to match the current situation.

× I usually just use my iPad, iPad, or iPhone to search the things I need and sometimes read the books on ebooks.

✓ I usually just use my iPad or iPhone to search for the things I need and sometimes read books on ebooks.

Repeating 'iPad' is redundant. Also, 'search the things' should be 'search for the things' because 'search' requires the preposition 'for' when followed by an object. 'Read the books on ebooks' is better as 'read books on ebooks' because 'ebooks' is plural and 'books' is general here.

× Well, if I have time to go to the library, I'll probably just grab some books and buy some coffee and maybe chat or read books with my friends together.

✓ Well, if I have time to go to the library, I'll probably just grab some books, buy some coffee, and maybe chat or read books with my friends together.

The sentence is mostly correct but adding commas improves clarity in listing actions.

× But sometimes I like to finish my text, finish my Pvt. in the library because it's a quiet environment for me.

✓ But sometimes I like to finish my text, finish my Pvt. in the library because it's a quiet environment for me.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence based on the provided grammar problem types.

× There was a library near my home like 15 meters away, so I often went there to finish my homework and doing some things that kids do like playing hide and seek.

✓ There was a library near my home about 15 meters away, so I often went there to finish my homework and do some things that kids do like playing hide and seek.

The phrase 'doing some things' should be 'do some things' to maintain parallel structure with 'finish my homework' and to use the base form after 'to'.

× I know it's bad, but we really like to play hide and seek in the library.

✓ I know it's bad, but we really liked to play hide and seek in the library.

Since the sentence refers to past habits, 'liked' is more appropriate than 'like' to maintain past tense consistency.

× But we are quiet. We are not like shouting or running around. No, we we are quietly doing that.

✓ But we are quiet. We are not shouting or running around. No, we are quietly doing that.

The phrase 'not like shouting' is incorrect; it should be 'not shouting'. Also, the repeated 'we' is a typo and should be removed.

× That's actually a really good question. One of my friend used to ask me that and she says that she thinks Chinese kids are really fond of reading books and we are enthusiastic about it, but actually we're not.

✓ That's actually a really good question. One of my friends used to ask me that and she says that she thinks Chinese kids are really fond of reading books and we are enthusiastic about it, but actually we're not.

'One of my friend' should be 'one of my friends' because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun.

× We're not. We are more prefer to go outside like regular kids in the playground, just playing the facilities in there.

✓ We're not. We prefer to go outside like regular kids in the playground, just playing with the facilities there.

'More prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' does not take 'more'. Also, 'playing the facilities' should be 'playing with the facilities' to use the correct preposition. 'In there' is better as 'there'.