Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In English (Cambodia), you should focus on using correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, say "I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my home. I usually read books on my phone, but sometimes I visit events hosted by bookstores."

예시: I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my home. Instead, I usually read books on my phone. However, sometimes I attend events hosted by local bookstores.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to answer directly and use present tense for habitual actions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "When I go to the library, I usually pick a book that is easy to read. Then, I listen to music while enjoying the book."

예시: When I go to the library, I usually pick a book that is easy to read. Then, I listen to music while enjoying the book.

제안: In English (Cambodia), use past tense to talk about past experiences and clarify your meaning. For example, "No, I never had a chance to go to the library when I was a kid because I had to work."

예시: No, I never had a chance to go to the library when I was a kid because I had to work.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to give a more confident and detailed answer with linking words. For example, "I think Chinese kids often go to the library if there is one near their house because it is convenient for them."

예시: I think Chinese kids often go to the library if there is one near their house because it is convenient for them.

× No, I don't often go to the library because there isn't 1 located near my home.

✓ No, I don't often go to the library because there isn't one located near my home.

The word '1' should be written as 'one' in this context because numbers from one to nine are usually written in words in formal writing. This is a common rule in English writing style.

× I usually reading a book on my phones, but sometimes I go to visit an event that hosts by oops many bookstore and some.

✓ I usually read a book on my phone, but sometimes I go to visit events hosted by many bookstores and some others.

The verb 'reading' is incorrectly used after 'usually'; it should be the base form 'read' because 'usually' is an adverb of frequency and is followed by the base verb. Also, 'phones' should be singular 'phone' to match the context. The phrase 'that hosts by oops many bookstore and some' is unclear and corrected to 'events hosted by many bookstores and some others' for clarity and grammar.

× If I went to the library, I would pick a book which is suitable for me and easy to read.

✓ If I went to the library, I would pick a book which was suitable for me and easy to read.

In the conditional sentence type 2, the 'if' clause is in past tense ('went'), so the result clause should use 'would' plus base verb. However, the relative clause 'which is suitable' should be in past tense 'was suitable' to maintain consistency with the hypothetical past context.

× And I'm gonna listen to music and enjoy reading book.

✓ And I'm going to listen to music and enjoy reading a book.

'Gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to' in formal speech. Also, 'reading book' is missing an article; it should be 'reading a book'.

× No, I never have a chance to go to the library since I worked it.

✓ No, I never had a chance to go to the library since I worked there.

The present perfect 'have' is incorrect with 'never' and 'since' referring to a past time; it should be simple past 'had'. Also, 'worked it' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'worked there' to indicate location.

× I guess they often go to the library if there are libraries near to their house.

✓ I guess they often go to the library if there are libraries near their house.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary after 'near'. The correct phrase is 'near their house' without 'to'.