Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to directly answer the question with a simple topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library in my free time because I don't have enough books at home. Moreover, the library has many important and necessary books that help me with my studies.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct word choice to improve clarity.

예시: I usually go to the library to study because it is very quiet there. In contrast, my home environment is noisy, so I can concentrate better in the library.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and provide supporting details. Use correct tense and vocabulary to express your ideas.

예시: To be honest, I did not often go to the library when I was a kid because I was not very interested in books at that time.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use appropriate linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: I am not very familiar with the habits of Chinese students since I have not been to China. However, I believe that many Chinese kids often go to the library because it is essential for their studies.

× Yes, I am going to the library my free time and my free time because as a student I have not enough book in at my home.

✓ Yes, I go to the library in my free time because as a student I do not have enough books at my home.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I am going' which is present continuous tense, but the context requires simple present tense 'I go' to express habitual action. Also, 'my free time and my free time' is redundant and 'have not enough book in at my home' has multiple errors: 'have not enough' should be 'do not have enough', 'book' should be plural 'books', and 'in at' is incorrect preposition usage; 'at' is correct here.

× Yes, I am going to the library my free time and my free time because as a student I have not enough book in at my home.

✓ Yes, I go to the library in my free time because as a student I do not have enough books at my home.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'have not enough' is incorrect; the correct form is 'do not have enough'.

× Yes, I am going to the library my free time and my free time because as a student I have not enough book in at my home.

✓ Yes, I go to the library in my free time because as a student I do not have enough books at my home.

The phrase 'in at my home' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'at' when referring to location like home. Also, 'in' is unnecessary here.

× But my library have many necessary books and important book.

✓ But my library has many necessary and important books.

The subject 'library' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'important book' should be plural 'important books' to match 'many' and 'books'.

× But my library have many necessary books and important book.

✓ But my library has many necessary and important books.

The verb 'have' does not agree with the singular subject 'library'. It should be 'has' for third person singular.

× Actually I go to library for study because library environment is so quiet, but my home environment is not quite and that's why I concerted my study in the library, that's why I usually do.

✓ Actually, I go to the library to study because the library environment is very quiet, but my home environment is not quiet, and that's why I concentrate on my study in the library; that's what I usually do.

The sentence has several issues: 'go to library' needs 'the' before 'library'; 'for study' should be 'to study'; 'library environment' needs 'the'; 'not quite' should be 'not quiet'; 'concerted' is incorrect, the correct verb is 'concentrate'; 'my study' is better as 'my studies'; 'that's why I usually do' is awkward and corrected to 'that's what I usually do'.

× Actually I go to library for study because library environment is so quiet, but my home environment is not quite and that's why I concerted my study in the library, that's why I usually do.

✓ Actually, I go to the library to study because the library environment is very quiet, but my home environment is not quiet, and that's why I concentrate on my study in the library; that's what I usually do.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' and 'library environment' to specify the particular place and environment.

× Actually I go to library for study because library environment is so quiet, but my home environment is not quite and that's why I concerted my study in the library, that's why I usually do.

✓ Actually, I go to the library to study because the library environment is very quiet, but my home environment is not quiet, and that's why I concentrate on my study in the library; that's what I usually do.

The word 'quite' is incorrectly used instead of 'quiet'. 'Quite' means 'completely' or 'very', but the intended meaning is 'quiet' meaning 'silent' or 'peaceful'.

× To be honest, I'm not going to live free in my childhood because childhood time because I'm not books lover and.

✓ To be honest, I did not have much free time in my childhood because I was not a book lover.

The sentence incorrectly uses present continuous 'I'm not going to live free' for past time. The correct past tense is 'did not have'. Also, 'childhood time because' is redundant and awkward; 'I was not a book lover' is the correct past tense form.

× To be honest, I'm not going to live free in my childhood because childhood time because I'm not books lover and.

✓ To be honest, I did not have much free time in my childhood because I was not a book lover.

The phrase 'I'm not books lover' is incorrect; it should be 'I was not a book lover' to correctly use the pronoun and article.

× I have not enough idea for Chinese students because I am not going the country and I think Chinese students will go the library because library is a very essential for every student.

✓ I do not have enough information about Chinese students because I have not been to the country, but I think Chinese students go to the library because the library is very essential for every student.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'have not enough idea' which should be 'do not have enough information'. 'I am not going the country' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I have not been to the country'. Also, 'will go the library' should be 'go to the library' to express habitual action. 'Library is a very essential' needs 'the' before 'library' and 'essential' should not have 'a' before it.

× I have not enough idea for Chinese students because I am not going the country and I think Chinese students will go the library because library is a very essential for every student.

✓ I do not have enough information about Chinese students because I have not been to the country, but I think Chinese students go to the library because the library is very essential for every student.

The preposition 'for' after 'idea' is incorrect; it should be 'about'. Also, 'going the country' is missing the preposition 'to' and should be 'going to the country' or better 'been to the country'. 'Go the library' is missing 'to'.