Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid mixing tenses unnecessarily and try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'I did not get much time' say 'I don't get much time'. Also, mention the frequency more clearly.

예시: I don't get much time to visit the library because of my busy schedule. However, whenever I have free time, I like to go there and read my favourite books.

제안: Your answer provides relevant content but can be improved by using correct grammar and linking words. For example, say 'Most of the time' and 'it gives me practical knowledge'. Also, explain why you like the book with clearer linking words like 'because' or 'as'.

예시: Most of the time, I read my favourite books and magazines in the library. For example, I enjoy reading 'Atomic Habits' because it provides practical knowledge about different aspects of life and helps me improve my habits.

제안: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and grammatically correct. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'I have a habit of learning books' and instead say 'I enjoy reading books now'.

예시: As far as I remember, I did not go to the library when I was a child because I was not aware of it. However, now I enjoy reading books and usually visit the library.

제안: Your answer is honest but can be improved by using more natural expressions and avoiding repetition. For example, say 'I am not very familiar with Chinese education or children's activities there'. Also, try to add a brief general comment if possible.

예시: Actually, I am not very familiar with Chinese education or whether children there often go to the library, as I live in India. However, I believe that many children worldwide enjoy reading and visiting libraries.

× As I have a busy schedule, I did not get much time to visit the library, but in my spare time I like to go there and read my favorite book.

✓ As I have a busy schedule, I do not get much time to visit the library, but in my spare time I like to go there and read my favorite book.

The sentence talks about a current busy schedule, so the verb tense should be present ('do not get') instead of past ('did not get'). This maintains consistency with the present situation.

× Most of time I read my favorite books and magazines.

✓ Most of the time I read my favorite books and magazines.

The phrase 'Most of time' is incorrect; it should be 'Most of the time' to correctly use the definite article with the noun 'time'.

× My favorite book is Atomic Habit as it gives me many practical knowledge about different aspects of our life and also help me to improve my habits.

✓ My favorite book is Atomic Habits as it gives me much practical knowledge about different aspects of our life and also helps me to improve my habits.

The book title is 'Atomic Habits' (plural). 'Many' is used with countable nouns, but 'knowledge' is uncountable, so 'much' is correct. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× As far as I can remember, when I was a child I did not go to a library because I'm not much aware about it.

✓ As far as I can remember, when I was a child I did not go to a library because I was not very aware of it.

The phrase 'I'm not much aware' is incorrect in past context; it should be 'I was not very aware'. Also, 'aware about' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'aware of'.

× But nowadays I have a habit of learning books.

✓ But nowadays I have a habit of reading books.

The verb 'learning books' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'reading books' when referring to engaging with books.

× I am not much much aware about the Chinese education and activities of their child.

✓ I am not very aware of Chinese education and the activities of their children.

The repetition 'much much' is incorrect; 'very' is appropriate here. Also, 'aware about' should be 'aware of'. 'Child' should be plural 'children' to refer generally.