List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and a bit unclear. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to connect your points logically and provide specific reasons why making a list helps you.

예시: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and ensures I don't forget items for the freezer or pantry.

제안: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like "the air in it". Try to use clear and correct expressions, and link your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

예시: Yes, I sometimes make a work list because it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently. This makes me feel more independent and confident.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use specific reasons. Avoid vague words like "lethargic" without explanation, and use linking words to connect your points.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel lazy or find it time-consuming to organize their tasks properly.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases like "I like banning people". Try to express your preference clearly and provide specific reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because I enjoy the physical act of writing and drawing, which helps me remember tasks better.

× it helps me to recognize the thing better and memorize the things better

✓ it helps me to recognize things better and memorize things better

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items, not just one. Using the plural form is appropriate when talking about more than one object.

× it helps me to not forget anything to make it in the freezer or in the in the pantry

✓ it helps me not to forget anything to put in the freezer or in the pantry

The phrase 'to make it in the freezer' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'put' when referring to placing items in a location. Also, 'helps me to not forget' is better phrased as 'helps me not to forget' for natural English usage.

× the air in it helps me to doing the things the way I want

✓ the order in it helps me to do the things the way I want

The word 'air' is incorrect here; likely the intended word is 'order'. Also, 'helps me to doing' should be 'helps me to do' because after 'helps' the base form of the verb is used.

× more more having a self-confidence

✓ having more self-confidence

The phrase 'more more having a self-confidence' is ungrammatical and redundant. The correct form is 'having more self-confidence' without the article 'a' because 'self-confidence' is an uncountable noun.

× One of the important reasons for not making list is can be uh, someone is a lethargic.

✓ One of the important reasons for not making a list can be that someone is lethargic.

The phrase 'not making list' requires the article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'is can be uh' is incorrect; it should be 'can be that'. The article 'a' is also not needed before 'lethargic' because 'lethargic' is an adjective describing 'someone'.

× When you don't feel good about making list, recognizing things and having much time to do the proper organized things, then you will definitely not have a list.

✓ When you don't feel good about making a list, recognizing things, and having enough time to do properly organized things, then you will definitely not have a list.

The phrase 'making list' needs the article 'a'. 'Having much time' is incorrect; 'enough time' is the correct quantifier. 'Proper organized things' should be 'properly organized things' because 'properly' is an adverb modifying 'organized'.

× I usually prefer to make a list on paper other than rather than phone

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone

The phrase 'other than rather than' is redundant; only 'rather than' is needed. Also, 'phone' should be preceded by 'on my' to indicate the device used.

× I am a kind of very physical objective person.

✓ I am the kind of very physical, objective person.

The phrase 'a kind of very physical objective person' is awkward. It should be 'the kind of very physical, objective person' with a comma separating adjectives. Also, 'kind of' is better used with 'the' in this context.

× I like banning people very much.

✓ I like writing by hand very much.

The phrase 'banning people' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or typo. The intended meaning is probably 'writing by hand' or 'using a pen'. Correcting to 'writing by hand' fits the context.

× Well, whenever I I have to do or I want to write or Draw Something, I so I immediately take a pen or pencil to draw.

✓ Well, whenever I have to do something or want to write or draw something, I immediately take a pen or pencil to do so.

The sentence has repeated words ('I I') and awkward structure. 'Draw Something' should be lowercase 'draw something'. The phrase 'I so I immediately' is incorrect; it should be 'I immediately'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and fluency.