List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some language errors and unclear phrases such as "when I show for groceries" and "reduces the stress of what you decide." To improve, use clearer and more natural expressions, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me avoid impulse buying, which can be expensive. For example, when I shop for groceries, the list keeps me focused and reduces the stress of deciding what to buy while in the store.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to many unclear and incorrect words such as "He is definitely," "my wake," "Organize Shouted," and "complete syntax." To improve, focus on clear pronunciation and correct word choice. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

예시: Definitely, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. For instance, I use a digital app on my phone that keeps my tasks and sends me reminders. This way, I feel accomplished when I complete tasks, which motivates me to keep going.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains unclear words like "Mckinley's" and "India head." To improve, use correct vocabulary and provide clear, specific reasons with linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

예시: Actually, some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and stressful. For example, when they have too many tasks, writing them down feels overwhelming and makes the list less helpful. Therefore, they prefer to keep things in their head instead of relying on lists.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains errors such as "make a listen everybody" and incomplete ideas. To improve, clearly state your preference and reasons using natural expressions and complete sentences within the time limit.

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper because it helps me remember the things I've written down. Also, I don't have to worry about my phone's battery running out when I use paper lists.

× Yes, I make a list before I go for shopping because it helps me prevent impulse purchases which can be costly.

✓ Yes, I make a list before I go shopping because it helps me prevent impulse purchases which can be costly.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'go shopping' without the preposition 'for'. This is a common collocation in English where 'go' is directly followed by the activity in its -ing form without 'for'.

× For instance, when I show for groceries, it helps me stay focused and also reduces the stress of what you decide when I'm in the store.

✓ For instance, when I shop for groceries, it helps me stay focused and also reduces the stress of deciding what to buy when I'm in the store.

The word 'show' is a typo and should be 'shop'. Also, 'the stress of what you decide' is awkward and unclear. It should be 'the stress of deciding what to buy' to correctly express the idea. The preposition 'for' is correctly used with 'shop' in 'shop for groceries'.

× For instance, when I show for groceries, it helps me stay focused and also reduces the stress of what you decide when I'm in the store.

✓ For instance, when I shop for groceries, it helps me stay focused and also reduces the stress of what I decide when I'm in the store.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used here. Since the speaker is talking about their own experience, the pronoun should be 'I' to maintain consistency and clarity in the sentence.

× He is definitely. I always make a list for my wake because it helps me stay for calls like Organize Shouted.

✓ Definitely. I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized with calls and shoutouts.

The phrase 'He is definitely' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'Definitely' to affirm the statement. 'Wake' is a typo and should be 'work'. The phrase 'stay for calls like Organize Shouted' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; it should be 'stay organized with calls and shoutouts' or similar. Also, 'Organize Shouted' is not a correct phrase; it seems to be a misinterpretation.

× They also have a digital app on my phone that's not only keeps my tags but also sends me reminders.

✓ I also have a digital app on my phone that not only keeps my tasks but also sends me reminders.

The phrase 'They also have' is incorrect because the subject is the speaker, so 'I also have' is correct. 'On my phone' is correct. 'That's not only keeps' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'that not only keeps' without 's' after 'that'. 'Tags' is likely a typo for 'tasks'.

× Having at least gives me a sense of accomplishment whenever I complete syntax, which motivates me to keep going.

✓ Having at least a list gives me a sense of accomplishment whenever I complete tasks, which motivates me to keep going.

The phrase 'Having at least' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'Having at least a list'. 'Syntax' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'tasks'. This correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the prepositional and vocabulary errors.

× Actually, some people don't like Mckinley's because they find it time consuming and stressful.

✓ Actually, some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and stressful.

The word 'Mckinley's' is a mishearing or typo for 'making lists'. The pronoun 'it' correctly refers to 'making lists'. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× For example, when they have too many tasks to write down, they feel it's overwhelming and makes the list less useful.

✓ For example, when they have too many tasks to write down, they feel it's overwhelming and that it makes the list less useful.

The original sentence is mostly correct but missing the conjunction 'that' before 'makes' to connect the clauses properly. This improves sentence structure and clarity.

× As a result, they prefer to keep things India head rather than relying on the lists.

✓ As a result, they prefer to keep things in their head rather than relying on lists.

'India head' is a mishearing or typo for 'in their head'. The pronoun 'their' is necessary to indicate possession. Also, 'the lists' should be 'lists' without 'the' because it refers to lists in general.

× I prefer to make a listen everybody because it tells me to remember the things I've written down and it's also I wouldn't have to think about battery rundown.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it helps me remember the things I've written down and I don't have to worry about battery running out.

'Make a listen everybody' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list on my phone'. 'It tells me to remember' is incorrect; 'it helps me remember' is correct. 'It's also I wouldn't have to think about battery rundown' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'I don't have to worry about battery running out'. This correction fixes prepositional errors and improves clarity.