List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, explain why you make a list and how it helps you.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget things easily. For instance, having a list helps me remember essential items like water and snacks. Moreover, it saves time as I can shop efficiently without wandering around. Therefore, making a list makes my shopping experience more organized and less stressful.

제안: Your response is repetitive and unclear. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to add specific reasons or examples. Avoid repeating the same idea and focus on coherence and grammar.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because I often forget tasks. By listing everything, I can keep track of what needs to be done. This method helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical mistakes. To improve, clearly state the reason why some people avoid lists, then contrast with your own habit using linking words. Use correct sentence structures and vocabulary relevant to the context.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory. However, I find it helpful to write things down since I often forget tasks. Therefore, making a list ensures I don't miss anything important.

제안: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. To improve, start with a clear preference statement, then explain reasons using linking words. Use appropriate vocabulary and avoid redundancy.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easily accessible anytime. Unlike paper lists, I don't have to worry about losing them or carrying extra items. Additionally, phone apps allow me to edit my lists conveniently, making the process more efficient.

× I basically start things when I go for shopping becaused I will little bit confused and moreover if I will convert I was unable to buy anything.

✓ I basically start things when I go shopping because I get a little bit confused and moreover if I don't plan, I am unable to buy anything.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. 'Becaused' is a misspelling of 'because'. The modal verb 'will' is incorrectly used here; present simple tense is appropriate to express habitual actions. 'If I will convert' is unclear and likely intended as 'if I don't plan'. The sentence needed restructuring for clarity and correct tense usage.

× So basically I used to list what the things I need to buy.

✓ So basically I list the things I need to buy.

The phrase 'used to list' suggests a past habit, but the context implies a current habit, so present simple 'list' is correct. 'What the things I need to buy' is incorrect; it should be 'the things I need to buy' without 'what'.

× It helps me easier to buy a water needs things like Dubai and if there is anything else I will solistice.

✓ It helps me to buy necessary things more easily, like water and other items, and if there is anything else, I will add it to the list.

The phrase 'helps me easier' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me to buy more easily'. 'A water needs things like Dubai' is unclear and incorrect; likely intended 'necessary things like water'. 'Solistice' is a misspelling or incorrect word; 'add it to the list' is appropriate here.

× Yes, basically I need to list all the things. So what I need to do because basically I forgot everything then I need to list everything so that I need to get remember what the things I need to work and it what am I need to work.

✓ Yes, basically I need to list all the things I need to do because I usually forget everything. So I list everything to remember what I need to work on and what tasks I have.

The sentence has pronoun misuse and unclear phrasing. 'So what I need to do because basically I forgot everything' is incorrect; it should be 'I need to list all the things I need to do because I usually forget everything'. 'I need to get remember' is incorrect; 'to remember' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Some other people don't make list because they usually remember what settings need to do and they will memorize what to do.

✓ Some people don't make lists because they usually remember what they need to do and can memorize their tasks.

'Settings need to do' is incorrect; it should be 'they need to do'. 'Make list' should be 'make lists' (plural). The sentence is corrected for pronoun use and plural form.

× But some of people like me, they usually forward then they will make the list.

✓ But some people like me usually prefer to make a list.

'Some of people' is incorrect; it should be 'some people'. 'They usually forward then they will make the list' is unclear and incorrect; likely intended 'they usually prefer to make a list'. The sentence is simplified and corrected for pronoun and verb use.

× But these people want forgot what they what they want to do, so they don't make any listen.

✓ But these people want to forget what they want to do, so they don't make any list.

'Want forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'want to forget' or 'forget'. 'Listen' is a misspelling of 'list'. The sentence is corrected for verb form and spelling.

× I basically tried to list on my phone because it is very access to me and and moreover I can able to see any time if I wrote it down on the paper.

✓ I basically try to make lists on my phone because it is very accessible to me and moreover I can see it anytime, unlike if I write it down on paper.

'Tried to list on my phone' should be 'try to make lists on my phone' for habitual action. 'Very access to me' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'very accessible to me'. 'Can able to see' is incorrect; 'can see' is correct. 'If I wrote it down' should be 'if I write it down' to match present tense.

× I use value for go to the paper on in my table or I I wasn't able to carry that one.

✓ I usually keep paper on my table, but I am not able to carry it around.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect prepositions and phrasing. 'Use value for go to the paper on in my table' is incorrect; corrected to 'keep paper on my table'. 'I wasn't able to carry that one' is corrected to 'I am not able to carry it around' to match present tense and clarity.

× If I list my things on my phone it will be easy for me and it is a very handy.

✓ If I list my things on my phone, it is easy for me and very handy.

Missing comma after the conditional clause. 'It is a very handy' is incorrect; 'very handy' is an adjective phrase and does not need 'a'. The sentence is corrected for punctuation and article use.