List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "I always prefers" and "Without loyalist." To improve, focus on correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. Try to use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I always prefer to make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember both important and less important items. Without a list, I often forget to buy some essential things, which can be frustrating. Therefore, making a list saves me time and keeps me organized during my shopping trips.

제안: Your response addresses the question but has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases, such as "I user To Do List app" and "uses the chains off." To improve, use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, try to use linking words like "besides" or "in addition" properly to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, definitely. I make a list for my work, and it works well for me. It helps me stay organized and prioritize my tasks effectively. Besides, I use a To-Do List app on my phone that sends me reminders to ensure I complete everything on time. This method really helps me manage my workload efficiently.

제안: Your answer has several errors and unclear phrases, such as "don't like to make meals" instead of "lists," and "making list is an accessory." To improve, focus on accurate vocabulary and sentence structure. Use linking words like "especially" and "additionally" correctly to connect your ideas. Also, clarify your points with specific reasons.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming, especially when they are busy with work and personal commitments. Additionally, some may feel that making lists is unnecessary or prefer to keep things spontaneous rather than planned. For these reasons, they avoid creating lists.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains some awkward phrasing and minor grammatical errors, such as "I keep my mobile phone every time with me" and "make a list in phone." To improve, use more natural expressions and correct prepositions. Also, try to use linking words like "because" to explain your reasons clearly.

예시: To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have it with me. It is very convenient and easy to create and access lists on my phone rather than on paper. Also, I can quickly find the items I need using my mobile device.

× Yes, I always prefers I always prefer to make a list when I go for shopping because it helps me remember both important and less important items.

✓ Yes, I always prefer to make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember both important and less important items.

The verb 'prefer' should be in the base form 'prefer' after the subject 'I' which is first person singular. 'Prefers' is used for third person singular subjects. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'.

× Without loyalist, I often forgot to buy some important things which can be frustrating for me.

✓ Without a list, I often forget to buy some important things which can be frustrating for me.

The word 'loyalist' is incorrect here; it should be 'a list'. Also, 'forgot' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so 'forget' in present tense is appropriate.

× Without loyalist, I often forgot to buy some important things which can be frustrating for me.

✓ Without a list, I often forget to buy some important things which can be frustrating for me.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used.

× Also, according to me, making a list also saves me time and keeps me organized during my shopping tips.

✓ Also, in my opinion, making a list saves me time and keeps me organized during my shopping trips.

The phrase 'according to me' is not idiomatic; 'in my opinion' is correct. Also, 'shopping tips' should be 'shopping trips' to mean outings for shopping.

× Yes definitely. I do make a list for my work and it works well for me.

✓ Yes, definitely. I do make a list for my work and it works well for me.

A comma is needed after 'Yes' to separate the interjection properly.

× It also helped me to stay organized and prioritize my tasks effectively.

✓ It also helps me to stay organized and prioritize my tasks effectively.

The sentence refers to a current habit, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate instead of past tense 'helped'.

× Beside this, I user To Do List app on my phone which sends me reminders to ensure I complete everything on time.

✓ Besides this, I use the To Do List app on my phone which sends me reminders to ensure I complete everything on time.

'Beside' should be 'Besides' to mean 'in addition'. 'User' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'use'. Also, 'To Do List app' should have 'the' before it as a specific app.

× This method really helps me manage my workload and uses the chains off.

✓ This method really helps me manage my workload and uses the chains off.

The phrase 'uses the chains off' is unclear and likely incorrect. Possibly intended phrase is missing or incorrect; no correction possible without clarification.

× Some people don't like to make meals because they find it time consuming, especially when they're busy with work and personal commitments.

✓ Some people don't like to make lists because they find it time-consuming, especially when they're busy with work and personal commitments.

'Make meals' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'make lists'. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× Additionally, some may feel that making list is an accessory or prefer to keep things spontaneous rather than planned.

✓ Additionally, some may feel that making lists is unnecessary or prefer to keep things spontaneous rather than planned.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'an accessory' is incorrect in this context; 'unnecessary' fits better.

× For these reasons, they were creating list together.

✓ For these reasons, they avoid creating lists.

The phrase 'were creating list together' is incorrect and does not fit the context. The intended meaning is likely that they avoid making lists. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists'.

× To be honest, I would prefer to make a list on my phone because I keep my mobile phone every time with me.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always keep my mobile phone with me.

'Would prefer' suggests conditional, but here a simple preference is expressed, so 'prefer' is better. 'Keep my mobile phone every time with me' is awkward; 'always keep my mobile phone with me' is correct.

× So it is very convenient and easy for me to make a list in phone rather than on a paper because we can also find the things on the mobile phone easily.

✓ So it is very convenient and easy for me to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because we can also find things on the mobile phone easily.

The correct preposition is 'on my phone' not 'in phone'. Also, 'on a paper' should be 'on paper'. 'Find the things' should be 'find things' for natural phrasing.