List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. Try to use complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'having at least saved me so much time and prevent me from buying unnecessary things,' you could say 'This has saved me a lot of time and helped me avoid buying unnecessary items.'

예시: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized. For example, when I shop for groceries, this has saved me a lot of time and helped me avoid buying unnecessary items.

제안: Your answer is quite confusing and lacks clarity due to grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to organize your ideas logically and use simple, correct sentences. Also, avoid irrelevant details and focus on answering the question directly. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work, and they are very helpful. For instance, I create a checklist of tasks I need to complete and tick them off as I finish. This method helps me stay organized and saves time.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and fragmented sentences that affect clarity. Try to use complete sentences and connect your ideas with linking words. Also, provide more specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it overwhelming, especially for small tasks. They prefer to shop freely without restrictions, which makes the experience more enjoyable for them. Therefore, making a list might feel unnecessary and reduce their enjoyment.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me. I can easily open the notes app and write down things whenever I remember them, which is more convenient than using paper.

× Yes, I usually make list before I go shopping.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× For example when I shop for groceries, having at least saved me so much time and prevent me from buying unnecessary things.

✓ For example, when I shop for groceries, having a list has saved me so much time and prevented me from buying unnecessary things.

The sentence requires the past participle forms 'saved' and 'prevented' to correctly express completed actions. Also, 'having a list' is the subject, so 'has saved' is appropriate.

× Yes I do make list for my work and they do work up an hour ago for a shopping for any anything I just make a checklist about things I need to buy and I just keep on adding on things into my pocket and his key and checking out the things out of my list while buying it.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work and it does work. Up an hour ago, for shopping for anything, I just make a checklist about things I need to buy and keep adding things into my pocket and key, and check off the things from my list while buying them.

The noun 'list' is singular and needs the article 'a'. The pronoun 'they' should be 'it' to agree with singular 'list'. The sentence is also restructured for clarity and correct verb forms.

× And this is how I also save up money and stop myself from buying unnecessary things.

✓ And this is how I also save money and stop myself from buying unnecessary things.

The phrase 'save up money' is less common; 'save money' is more appropriate here. The pronoun use is correct, so only the verb phrase is adjusted.

× Some people don't like making lists because they found it a bit overwhelming, especially for small tasks.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find it a bit overwhelming, especially for small tasks.

The verb tense should be present 'find' to agree with 'don't like' which is present tense, maintaining consistency.

× Tasks they prefer to shop freely without restrictions.

✓ They prefer to shop freely without restrictions for small tasks.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Reordering the sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× Enjoy their experience I'd comes.

✓ They enjoy their experience as it comes.

The original phrase is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Replacing with 'They enjoy their experience as it comes' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× For them, making a list feels unnecessary.

✓ For them, making a list feels unnecessary.

This sentence is correct and requires no change.

× I think that's why.

✓ I think that's why.

This sentence is correct and requires no change.

× I prefer making list on my phone 'cause my phone is always with me so I just open note app and write down things anytime I remember and the things I have to remember for my other schedule.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because my phone is always with me, so I just open the notes app and write down things anytime I remember, including things I have to remember for my other schedule.

The noun 'list' is singular and requires the article 'a'. Also, 'note app' should be 'notes app' with the definite article 'the' for clarity.

× So to keeping my notes on me is more convenient to me then.

✓ So keeping my notes on me is more convenient for me then.

The phrase 'to keeping' is incorrect; it should be 'keeping'. Also, 'convenient to me' should be 'convenient for me' as 'for' is the correct preposition here.