List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping to stay organized."

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping to stay organized and ensure I don't forget anything.

제안: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Provide a clear response with a topic sentence and supporting detail. For example, "No, I don't make lists for work because my tasks are unpredictable and hard to organize."

예시: No, I don't make lists for work because my tasks are unpredictable and hard to organize, so I prefer to handle them as they come.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand and lacks coherence. Try to explain clearly using linking words. For example, "Some people dislike making lists because if they don't complete the tasks, they feel disappointed, which discourages them from making lists again."

예시: Some people dislike making lists because if they don't complete the tasks, they feel disappointed, which discourages them from making lists again.

제안: Your answer is somewhat understandable but contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to give a clear, concise answer with linking words. For example, "For daily use, I prefer making lists on paper because I can easily carry it in my pocket and refer to it whenever needed."

예시: For daily use, I prefer making lists on paper because I can easily carry it in my pocket and refer to it whenever needed.

× Of course and make her list her when I shop.

✓ Of course, I make my list when I shop.

The pronouns 'her' are incorrectly used instead of 'my' to indicate possession. 'My' is the correct possessive pronoun for the speaker. Also, the sentence lacks a subject before 'make'.

× No, I never make a list to a for my work 'cause I work is a mess.

✓ No, I never make a list for my work because my work is a mess.

The preposition 'to a' is incorrect here; 'for' is the correct preposition to indicate purpose. Also, 'cause' should be expanded to 'because' for clarity. The phrase 'I work is a mess' is incorrect; it should be 'my work is a mess' to show possession.

× 'Cause once you make her a lot, at least not then you don't do them, you will feel the failure in your head and the data makes you don't make a list anymore.

✓ Because once you make a lot of lists, and then you don't do them, you will feel like a failure in your head and that makes you not want to make a list anymore.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used instead of 'a lot of lists'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs rephrasing for clarity. 'Feel the failure' is unnatural; 'feel like a failure' is correct. 'The data makes you don't make a list anymore' is incorrect; it should be 'that makes you not want to make a list anymore'.

× Uh. Well, daily purposes. I would like to make her Lister on paper 'cause I can't put it, put it, put the paper in my pocket and whenever I need I need it, I will, uh, I will hand it out and see it.

✓ Uh, well, for daily purposes, I would like to make my list on paper because I can put the paper in my pocket and whenever I need it, I will take it out and see it.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used instead of 'my' to indicate possession. 'Lister' is incorrect; it should be 'list'. The phrase 'put it, put it, put the paper' is repetitive and incorrect; simplified to 'put the paper'. 'Hand it out' is incorrect in this context; 'take it out' is appropriate.