List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors which affect clarity. Try to make your response more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Also, be specific and clear in your examples. For instance, instead of 'saved a lot of West into a list', specify what you saved and how the list helped.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need. It also keeps me organized and prevents me from buying unnecessary things. For example, last week I saved a lot of money by sticking to my list and avoiding impulse purchases.

제안: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question about making lists for work. Please listen carefully and respond directly to the question. Use clear sentences and avoid repeating previous answers. Also, ensure your grammar is correct and your answer is relevant to the question asked.

예시: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work every day. It helps me keep track of my tasks and ensures I don't forget anything important. This method has improved my productivity significantly.

제안: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect, which makes it difficult to understand. Try to form complete sentences and clearly express your ideas. Also, provide logical reasons why some people might not like making lists, and avoid vague statements.

예시: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or they prefer to shop spontaneously. Others might not feel the need if they have a large budget and don't worry about overspending.

제안: Your answer is fragmented and unclear. Please try to speak in full sentences and organise your ideas logically. Clearly state your preference and explain why, using linking words to connect your ideas. Avoid unclear phrases and pronunciation errors.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient and safe. Unlike paper lists, which can be lost easily, digital lists are always accessible and easy to edit.

× Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping bought.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping.

The word 'bought' is incorrectly placed at the end of the sentence, causing confusion. The sentence is in present tense talking about a habitual action, so 'bought' (past tense) is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× It also keeps me organized and prevents me from the spending too much money on unnecessary items.

✓ It also keeps me organized and prevents me from spending too much money on unnecessary items.

The phrase 'prevents me from the spending' is incorrect because 'from' should be followed by the gerund form without 'the'. The correct form is 'prevents me from spending'.

× For example, last week I saved a lot of West into a list.

✓ For example, last week I saved a lot of money by sticking to my list.

The phrase 'saved a lot of West into a list' is unclear and incorrect. 'West' is likely a typo for 'money'. Also, 'into a list' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'by sticking to my list' to explain how money was saved.

× Was I always make on this before I go shopping because it helps me remember everything they need to buy.

✓ I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and pronoun usage. 'Was I always make on this' is incorrect; it should be 'I always make a list'. Also, 'they need to buy' should be 'I need to buy' to match the subject.

× According to me. Some people. Who don't like to make? Miss. They're not. Aware that what to buy and how to buy.

✓ According to me, some people who don't like to make lists are not aware of what to buy and how to buy it.

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect pronoun and article usage. 'Miss' is likely a typo for 'lists'. Also, 'aware that what to buy' is incorrect; it should be 'aware of what to buy'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× And most probably they had. Unlimited budget.

✓ And most probably they have an unlimited budget.

The sentence uses past tense 'had' incorrectly when referring to a general statement. Present tense 'have' is appropriate here. Also, 'unlimited budget' needs the article 'an' before it.

× Like paper. To make list phone number iPhone.

✓ I like paper to make lists, but I also use my iPhone.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'To make list phone number iPhone' is incorrect and confusing. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun and article usage.

× It is the easiest way to make list. Anne.

✓ It is the easiest way to make a list.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'Anne' seems to be an error or unrelated word and is removed.

× It's really convenient, I can say. Like. On paper. We can loss to people.

✓ It's really convenient, I can say. Unlike on paper, we can lose lists easily.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun usage and spelling errors. 'We can loss to people' is incorrect; likely intended 'we can lose lists'. Also, 'Like. On paper.' is unclear and corrected to 'Unlike on paper' for contrast.

× But in my phone it's very safe.

✓ But on my phone, it's very safe.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to using a phone; 'on my phone' is the correct phrase. Also, a comma is added after 'phone' for clarity.