List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'show' instead of 'shop' and 'bite' instead of 'buy'. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember all the items I need to buy. For example, my family members also make lists for groceries and other essentials to avoid forgetting anything.

제안: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and is somewhat repetitive. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words like 'because' or 'therefore' to explain why making lists helps you meet deadlines. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me complete tasks before their deadlines. I organise my activities according to the list, which ensures I stay on schedule.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas more clearly and directly. Avoid unnecessary phrases like 'I think or in my perspective'. Also, explain why some people might dislike making lists and then give your own opinion with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: Some people may dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally. However, I personally prefer making lists because it helps me stay organised and not forget important tasks or items.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and ends abruptly. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and complete your sentences fully. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your preference clearly. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can easily check my list anytime and avoid forgetting important items.

× Yes, I make a list when I show because making list is really important so that we don't for get about things that we need to buy.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because making a list is really important so that we don't forget about things that we need to buy.

The word 'show' is a typo and should be 'shop'. Also, 'making list' should be 'making a list' because 'list' is a countable noun and requires an article here. 'For get' is a typo and should be 'forget'.

× Of a grandparents, our mothers, all of us make.

✓ Our grandparents, our mothers, all of us make lists.

The phrase 'Of a grandparents' is incorrect; it should be 'Our grandparents'. Also, 'make' needs an object; 'lists' is the correct plural noun here.

× List for groceries and other items that need to be bite so we will be remembering that particular thing.

✓ Lists for groceries and other items that need to be bought so we will remember those particular things.

'List' should be plural 'Lists' to match the plural subject. 'Bite' is incorrect; the past participle 'bought' is needed here. 'Remembering' should be 'remember' to fit the sentence structure. 'That particular thing' should be plural 'those particular things' to agree with 'items'.

× Yes, I make list for my work.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work.

'List' is a countable noun and requires the article 'a' here.

× It's really important to do particular task in a particular deadline.

✓ It's really important to do a particular task within a particular deadline.

'Particular task' needs the article 'a'. Also, 'in a particular deadline' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'within' for deadlines.

× So it is really necessary to complete a task before that line.

✓ So it is really necessary to complete a task before that deadline.

'That line' is incorrect; the intended word is 'deadline'.

× So in order to that we make or I make list according to my schedule an after that I will be scheduling all my activities and do.

✓ So in order to do that, I make a list according to my schedule and after that, I schedule all my activities and do them.

The phrase 'in order to that' is incorrect; it should be 'in order to do that'. 'Make list' needs the article 'a'. 'An' should be 'and'. The sentence was incomplete and needed clarification for 'do'.

× I think or in my perspective, I see that most of the person don't like making lists.

✓ I think, from my perspective, I see that most people don't like making lists.

'Most of the person' is incorrect; it should be 'most people' for plural. 'Or in my perspective' is better as 'from my perspective'.

× I think or in my perspective, I see that most of the person don't like making lists.

✓ I think, from my perspective, I see that most people don't like making lists.

'Person' is singular but 'don't' is plural verb form; changing 'person' to 'people' corrects subject-verb agreement.

× I personally don't agree. In making list, it's my choice that I can remember or I can do the things that I wanted to do or I will not forget the thing that I wanted to buy.

✓ I personally don't agree. By making a list, I can remember and do the things I want to do and I will not forget the things I want to buy.

'In making list' should be 'By making a list'. 'Wanted' should be present tense 'want' to match the context. 'Thing' should be plural 'things'.

× So it's not necessary for me to make a list.

✓ So it's not necessary for me to make a list.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× I prefer making list in my phone because all of us are always carrying our phones with us, so it's always better to make a list on our phone so that we will not forget to take phone.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because all of us always carry our phones with us, so it's better to make a list on our phone so that we will not forget to take the phone.

'Making list' should be 'making lists'. 'In my phone' should be 'on my phone'. 'Forget to take phone' needs the article 'the' before 'phone'.

× I prefer making list in my phone because all of us are always carrying our phones with us, so it's always better to make a list on our phone so that we will not forget to take phone.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because all of us always carry our phones with us, so it's better to make a list on our phone so that we will not forget to take the phone.

'In my phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on my phone'.

× I think it's really important to remark on something that we carry always, so I think it's better to.

✓ I think it's really important to make a note of something that we always carry, so I think it's better to do that.

'Remark on' is incorrect in this context; 'make a note of' is appropriate. The sentence was incomplete and needed completion for clarity.