List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by adding a linking word and a bit more detail to make it more natural and effective. For example, explain how making a list saves time.

예시: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember what to buy, and as a result, it saves me a lot of time by preventing unnecessary wandering in the store.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding the question repetition and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more concise and natural.

예시: I don't usually make lists for house chores; however, I always make a list when I study because it helps me choose topics and stay organized, which really improves my focus.

제안: Your answer has good points but the second sentence is incomplete and unclear. Try to complete your ideas and use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it tedious. Moreover, lists remind them of their responsibilities, which they may want to avoid, so they prefer not to make them.

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using clearer linking words and more natural expressions. Also, replace 'obtainable' with a more common word.

예시: It depends on the situation. Sometimes I write lists on paper if I have it handy, but other times I use my phone because it's always with me and very convenient.

× Moreover, making lists that remind them of their responsibilities, which they may want to avoid.

✓ Moreover, making lists reminds them of their responsibilities, which they may want to avoid.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb, making it a sentence fragment. To correct this, the phrase 'making lists' should be followed by a verb to form a complete sentence. Here, 'reminds' is added to complete the thought and maintain subject-verb agreement.