List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "making a list is the essential part before shopping in" and "everyone is scared that they might forget". Instead, try to use simpler and more natural expressions. Also, try to limit your answer to about 3-4 sentences for better effectiveness.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. Without a list, I might forget important items. So, making a list keeps my shopping organised and efficient.

제안: Your answer addresses the question well, but the phrase "to be on the time" is unnatural. Instead, use "to be on time" or "to manage my time well". Also, try to use linking words like "however" or "but" to connect ideas smoothly. Keep your sentences clear and avoid minor grammatical errors.

예시: I usually don't make lists for casual work, but for my studies, I definitely create lists to complete tasks and chapters. This method helps me manage my time effectively and stay organised.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically. For example, explain that some people find lists boring or too formal, and they may feel responsible for tasks once listed. Use linking words like "because" and "also" properly to connect your points.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and too formal, like academic work. Also, they may feel that making a list means they have to take full responsibility for completing the tasks.

제안: Your answer has good content but contains some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes, such as "whenever I don't have people at once" and "make lips on your phone". Try to speak clearly and use correct vocabulary. Also, use linking words like "so" or "therefore" to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: It depends on the situation. If I have paper available, I prefer to write my list on it. Otherwise, I use my phone because it's very convenient and easy to access.

× Oh definitely. Making a list is the essential part before shopping in because everyone is scared that they might forget the things they thought to buy.

✓ Oh definitely. Making a list is an essential part before shopping because everyone is scared that they might forget the things they plan to buy.

The phrase 'shopping in' is incorrect; it should be 'shopping'. Also, 'the essential part' should be 'an essential part' because it is a general statement, not a specific one. 'They thought to buy' is incorrect tense and phrasing; 'they plan to buy' is more appropriate here.

× So making the list is important and I make it.

✓ So making the list is important and I make one.

The phrase 'make it' is vague here; 'make one' is clearer when referring to making a list. Also, 'the list' is specific, but since the list is being introduced generally, 'a list' or 'one' is better.

× I don't really make lists for my casual work, but when it comes to my education, I definitely make a list to perform certain tasks and to complete certain chapters.

✓ I don't really make lists for my casual work, but when it comes to my education, I definitely make a list to perform certain tasks and complete certain chapters.

The phrase 'to perform certain tasks and to complete certain chapters' is repetitive; removing the second 'to' improves sentence flow and is grammatically correct.

× So yeah, it really helped me to be on the time.

✓ So yeah, it really helped me to be on time.

The phrase 'on the time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'on time' meaning punctual.

× Some people might not like making lists because the. Find it so like academic work and they find it so boring to make lists and.

✓ Some people might not like making lists because they find it like academic work and boring to make lists.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Also, they think that it's the IT will be. It would be the responsibility if they make the list.

✓ Also, they think that it will be their responsibility if they make the list.

The phrase 'it's the IT will be' is incorrect and confusing. Correcting it to 'it will be their responsibility' clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun usage.

× It depends whenever the paper is available.

✓ It depends on whether paper is available.

The phrase 'depends whenever' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'depends on whether'. Also, 'the paper' should be 'paper' in general sense.

× I make lists on paper and whenever I don't have people at once, so I use my mobile phone to make the lists.

✓ I make lists on paper and whenever I don't have paper at once, I use my mobile phone to make the lists.

The word 'people' is incorrect here; it should be 'paper'. Also, the phrase 'at once' is awkward; it can be omitted or replaced with 'available' for clarity.

× It will. It is very convenient to make lips on your phone.

✓ It is very convenient to make lists on your phone.

The sentence is fragmented and contains a typo 'lips' instead of 'lists'. Correcting the typo and combining the fragments improves clarity and correctness.