List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Use clearer linking words and correct prepositions to enhance fluency and coherence.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop for groceries, especially on weekends at places like Costco or Walmart. This helps me remember to restock essential items like toilet paper, food, and fruits that I use daily.

제안: Focus on clearer sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid repetition. Be specific about how the list helps you prioritize tasks.

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work, and they help me prioritize tasks effectively. For example, I identify urgent tasks to focus on first, and then I schedule less urgent ones for later, which improves my productivity.

제안: Improve clarity by correcting grammar and word choice. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific reasons why some people avoid making lists.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they trust their memory and prefer to organize tasks mentally. Additionally, they may find writing notes inconvenient or unnecessary to carry around.

제안: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to compare options clearly and avoid confusing phrases. Be specific about the advantages of using a phone for lists.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is portable and convenient. For example, I can easily update and reprioritize tasks anytime, unlike paper lists which can become messy when edited.

× Yes, I like making lists and when I'm going to shopping for groceries such as going to Costco, where Walmart during weekends, I need to make a list about any regular stuff I need to restock toilet paper or food or fruits or some kind of stuff that I need every day.

✓ Yes, I like making lists and when I'm going shopping for groceries such as going to Costco or Walmart during weekends, I need to make a list of any regular stuff I need to restock like toilet paper, food, fruits, or some kind of stuff that I need every day.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect because 'go' is followed by the gerund form without 'to'. The correct form is 'going shopping'. Also, 'where Walmart' is incorrect; it should be 'or Walmart'. Additionally, 'make a list about' should be 'make a list of'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× Yes, I like making lists and when I'm going to shopping for groceries such as going to Costco, where Walmart during weekends, I need to make a list about any regular stuff I need to restock toilet paper or food or fruits or some kind of stuff that I need every day.

✓ Yes, I like making lists and when I'm going shopping for groceries such as going to Costco or Walmart during weekends, I need to make a list of any regular stuff I need to restock like toilet paper, food, fruits, or some kind of stuff that I need every day.

The preposition 'about' is incorrectly used with 'make a list'. The correct preposition is 'of' to indicate the contents of the list. Also, 'where Walmart' is incorrect; 'or Walmart' is appropriate to list places.

× Yes, I like making list for my work.

✓ Yes, I like making lists for my work.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because the context implies making multiple lists or the general activity of list-making. Using the plural form is grammatically correct here.

× It works well for me because was a list I can prioritize the order of finishing my work items.

✓ It works well for me because with a list I can prioritize the order of finishing my work items.

The original sentence is missing a subject and preposition, making it unclear. Adding 'with a list' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× I can tell myself, help myself, clarified that which one is more urgent and I need to put more focus firstly and then I I can put some other non urgent tasks later.

✓ I can tell myself, help myself, clarify which tasks are more urgent and need more focus first, and then I can put some other non-urgent tasks later.

The verb 'clarified' should be in base form 'clarify' to match the parallel structure with 'tell' and 'help'. Also, 'that which one' is awkward; 'which tasks' is clearer. 'Firstly' is better replaced with 'first' for naturalness. 'Non urgent' should be hyphenated as 'non-urgent'.

× Some people don't like making listed because they believe in their own brain.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they believe in their own brain.

The word 'listed' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'lists'. 'Making lists' is the correct phrase to express the activity.

× So they don't want a buzzer was putting it down on a piece of paper or carry the notes in pen everywhere.

✓ So they don't want a bother putting it down on a piece of paper or carrying notes and a pen everywhere.

The phrase 'a buzzer was putting it down' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'a bother putting it down'. Also, 'carry the notes in pen' is incorrect; it should be 'carrying notes and a pen'. The gerund forms 'putting' and 'carrying' are needed after 'don't want'.

× I like making a list on my phone because it is more portable and more convenient.

✓ I like making a list on my phone because it is more portable and more convenient.

This sentence is correct in preposition usage; no correction needed here.

× For instance, I can adjust to my list and reprioritized my tasks anytime when I feel there is a need to do so.

✓ For instance, I can adjust my list and reprioritize my tasks anytime when I feel there is a need to do so.

The verb 'adjust' does not require the preposition 'to' in this context; it should be 'adjust my list'. Also, 'reprioritized' should be in base form 'reprioritize' to match the modal 'can'.

× Instead, on paper I would need to redraft the things and cross out some writings, which can be messy.

✓ Instead, on paper I would need to redraft things and cross out some writing, which can be messy.

The article 'the' before 'things' is unnecessary here. Also, 'writings' is usually uncountable in this context; 'writing' is more appropriate.

× But it was a film. I can carry it anywhere, anytime, and I can make it just manage just as I need.

✓ But it is digital. I can carry it anywhere, anytime, and I can manage it just as I need.

The phrase 'it was a film' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'it is digital' fits the context better. The phrase 'make it just manage just as I need' is ungrammatical; 'manage it just as I need' is correct and clear.