List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence. For example, explain why you make a list and how it helps you, using correct grammar and vocabulary.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember important items and stay within my budget. For instance, I usually write the list on my phone before I leave, which makes shopping more organised and efficient.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and supporting details with appropriate linking words. Use specific examples to explain how making lists helps your work productivity.

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work to stay organised and focused. I use digital apps that remind me of my tasks, which helps me complete both computer-based and fieldwork efficiently. As a result, my productivity has improved significantly.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly by using complete sentences and linking words. Explain the reasons why some people dislike lists with specific details.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted by fixed plans. They prefer to do things spontaneously, which makes them feel more free and relaxed.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is affected by unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Use clear sentences and linking words to explain your preference and reasons. Also, be specific about the advantages of using your phone for lists.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me, making it easy to add items anytime. Additionally, there are apps that help me organise my lists efficiently, and I can share them with friends if needed.

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✓ I make a list when I shop because it helps me ensure I don't forget anything important, helps me stay within my budget, and inspires me. So, I usually write it down on my phone before I go.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper sentence structure, making it difficult to understand. The correction breaks it into clear clauses with appropriate verbs and conjunctions, improving clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I'm at least on my work is how many stay organized and focused my trust.

✓ I am at least organized at my work to stay focused and trustworthy.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear phrasing. The correction clarifies the intended meaning by using correct pronouns and restructuring the sentence for clarity.

× I use a digital apps keep track of my workplace, which reminds me about my task.

✓ I use digital apps to keep track of my work, which remind me about my tasks.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'a' with the plural noun 'apps' and has singular/plural mismatches. The correction removes the article before the plural noun and adjusts verbs and nouns to agree in number.

× So I found that my product if increase render computer task and outfield.

✓ So I found that my productivity has increased both in computer tasks and in the field.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses proper sentence structure and vocabulary.

× Attempted murder after to complete all the tasks.

✓ I attempt to complete all the tasks afterwards.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing. The correction provides a complete sentence with proper verb usage and meaning.

× People don't like. Something like to be fixed road and they don't want to be tide down by list they.

✓ People don't like something fixed or rigid, and they don't want to be tied down by lists.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect words ('tide' instead of 'tied'). The correction fixes sentence fragments and word choice for clarity.

× Enjoy doing things as they think which make them feel free.

✓ They enjoy doing things as they think, which makes them feel free.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and has verb agreement errors. The correction adds the subject and corrects verb agreement.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's always with me making me easily shoe added items so it's more convenience and there's apps to help me organize my lispector.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's always with me, making it easy to add items. It's more convenient, and there are apps to help me organize my list.

The original sentence misuses quantifiers and articles ('a list' with 'apps'), has spelling errors ('shoe' instead of 'show', 'convenience' instead of 'convenient'), and awkward phrasing. The correction fixes these issues for clarity and correctness.

× Also I can't shut at least with my friend if they need.

✓ Also, I can share my list with my friends if they need it.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and verbs ('shut' instead of 'share', 'at least' is incorrect here). The correction uses appropriate pronouns and verbs to convey the intended meaning clearly.