List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct sentence structure and avoiding redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. For example, explain why making a list helps you and how it affects your shopping.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the store because it helps me focus on what I need. For instance, when I have a list, I can avoid buying unnecessary items and save time.

제안: Answer directly and clearly, using correct grammar and linking words. Provide specific examples about how making lists helps you at work or in daily tasks. Avoid confusing time references and be concise.

예시: Yes, I often make to-do lists for my work because they help me stay organized. For example, when I write down my tasks, I rarely forget important jobs and can complete them on time.

제안: Try to express your opinion clearly and logically. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why some people might dislike making lists. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous. Also, they might find lists restrictive or time-consuming, which makes them avoid using them.

제안: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and correct sentence structure. Clearly state your preference and explain why, giving specific reasons and examples.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy writing by hand. For example, I can easily carry a small notebook in my purse and quickly check my tasks whenever I need to.

× Yes, most of the time I have a a list shop when I want to go to the shopping center or grocery store because when I have a shop list, I can concentrate it in what I want and most of the time I headed for get the things that I want to buy from the.

✓ Yes, most of the time I have a shopping list when I want to go to the shopping center or grocery store because when I have a shopping list, I can concentrate on what I want and most of the time I head to get the things that I want to buy.

The phrase 'a a list shop' is incorrect; it should be 'a shopping list' to correctly express the noun. Also, 'shop list' should be 'shopping list' for proper noun usage. 'Concentrate it in' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'concentrate on'. 'I headed for get' is incorrect verb form and structure; it should be 'I head to get' to match present tense and correct verb usage.

× When I was a child, I think when I was in in 10 years, I have always To Do List because it totally makes me focus for the jobs I have to do during the day and I put most of the time I didn't forget that what I have to do.

✓ When I was a child, I think when I was 10 years old, I always had a To Do List because it totally helped me focus on the jobs I had to do during the day and most of the time I didn't forget what I had to do.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'I have always To Do List' should be 'I always had a To Do List' to reflect past tense. 'Makes me focus' should be 'helped me focus' to maintain past tense consistency. 'I put most of the time I didn't forget that what I have to do' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'most of the time I didn't forget what I had to do' for clarity and correct tense.

× Really I have no idea about the other peoples but I think it's because in happy making it To Do List is a better way to do the jobs and in saving time but some of the people maybe he wants to go around and.

✓ Really, I have no idea about other people but I think it's because happily making a To Do List is a better way to do the jobs and save time, but some people maybe want to go around and.

'Other peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is already plural and does not take an 's'. 'In happy making it To Do List' is incorrect phrasing; it should be 'happily making a To Do List'. 'Some of the people maybe he wants' is incorrect pronoun usage; it should be 'some people maybe want' to agree in number and person.

× Yes, most of the time I have a a list shop when I want to go to the shopping center or grocery store because when I have a shop list, I can concentrate it in what I want and most of the time I headed for get the things that I want to buy from the.

✓ Yes, most of the time I have a shopping list when I want to go to the shopping center or grocery store because when I have a shopping list, I can concentrate on what I want and most of the time I head to get the things that I want to buy.

The preposition 'in' after 'concentrate' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'headed for get' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'head to get' to indicate purpose.

× I'm a paper person and I really love to write my daily routines and to do jobs and in their paper and paper is better for me and to pick up from my pocket or from my purse and look.

✓ I'm a paper person and I really love to write my daily routines and to-do jobs on paper. Paper is better for me because I can pick it up from my pocket or purse and look at it.

The phrase 'in their paper' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper' to indicate the medium. The sentence structure is awkward and missing connectors; adding 'because' clarifies the reason. Also, 'to pick up from my pocket or from my purse and look' is incomplete; it should be 'pick it up from my pocket or purse and look at it' for clarity and correct verb usage.