List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，且内容重复。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连词连接细节，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: I usually don't make a shopping list because I like to pick items spontaneously. However, if I see something on sale, I often buy it to save money.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议使用简单句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词使内容连贯。

예시: I don't usually make lists for my current job because the tasks are simple and I can remember them easily. However, in my previous job, I had to make lists to manage complicated tasks effectively.

제안: 回答中有很多语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，避免使用错误词汇，并且注意句子结构。

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted. Seeing a list reminds them of tasks they must complete, which can cause stress.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意单复数和时态，使用正确词汇，并保持句子简洁。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone for important tasks because it can send notifications. Paper lists are less reliable since I often forget where I put them.

× I don't make a list of what I am shopping because I am personally like to pick up items and compare the price and if I saw something on sale and I will buy it and I will purchase a lot of things that interest in order something I will.

✓ I don't make a list of what I am shopping for because I personally like to pick up items and compare the prices, and if I see something on sale, I will buy it and purchase a lot of things that interest me in order.

动词后面需要正确使用-ing形式或介词短语。这里'shopping'后面应加介词'for'表示购物的对象；'personally like'应改为'personally like to'；'compare the price'应为复数形式'prices'；'if I saw'应为现在时'if I see'；'things that interest in order'应为'things that interest me in order'。这些都是动词和介词使用错误。

× I usually don't make list for my current job because it doesn't have a lot of list to do an I can easily remember in my mind.

✓ I usually don't make a list for my current job because it doesn't have a lot of tasks to do and I can easily remember them in my mind.

名词前缺少冠词'a'，'make list'应为'make a list'；'a lot of list'应为'a lot of tasks'或'items'；'an I'应为'and I'；'remember in my mind'应补充宾语'them'。冠词和连词使用错误。

× But before my previous job is to require, it requires a lot of things complicated thing.

✓ But my previous job required a lot of complicated things.

时态错误，描述过去的工作应使用过去时'required'；'is to require'结构不正确；'a lot of things complicated thing'语序错误，应为'a lot of complicated things'。

× So I need to make a list to make everything effective and in order.

✓ So I need to make a list to make everything effective and orderly.

'in order'作为副词短语使用时应改为'adjective'或副词形式'orderly'，使句子更通顺。

× I think people who does who don't like making list because they think that's the restriction for them to do things and there are feel like a Buddha Nana pressure when they saw their lists and they know they must do it.

✓ I think people who don't like making lists think that it's a restriction for them to do things, and they feel like a burden or pressure when they see their lists and know they must do it.

主谓一致错误，'people who does'应为'people who do'；'making list'应为'making lists'；'there are feel'应为'they feel'；'Buddha Nana'应为'burden or'；'when they saw'应为'when they see'。这些都是主谓一致和词汇错误。

× If the task is important or urgent, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it can send me notification or set alarms to remind me.

✓ If the task is important or urgent, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it can send me notifications or set alarms to remind me.

'send me notification'中'notification'应为复数'notifications'，表示多次提醒。

× However, when I make lists on people, I often forgot we are putting them and there are less reliable.

✓ However, when I make lists on paper, I often forget where I put them and they are less reliable.

'make lists on people'应为'make lists on paper'；'forgot'应为'forget'；'we are putting them'应为'where I put them'；'there are less reliable'应为'they are less reliable'。代词和词汇使用错误。

× Therefore, using my phone helps me to stay organized and then don't miss anything in.

✓ Therefore, using my phone helps me to stay organized and not miss anything.

句子结构错误，'and then don't miss anything in'不完整，应改为'and not miss anything'，使句子完整通顺。