Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer phrases. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more effectively. For example, say "I don't like singing because I find it hard to express emotions through songs, which makes me lack confidence."

예시: I don't like singing because I find it difficult to express my emotions through songs, and this makes me lose confidence when I sing.

제안: Your answer is unclear and fragmented. Try to form complete sentences and express your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your thoughts. For example, "No, I haven't learned how to sing yet, but in the future, I might spend some money to take classes to improve how I express emotions through songs."

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing yet, but in the future, I might spend some money to take singing classes to improve how I express emotions through songs.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, "Maybe I want to sing for my friends because I feel more comfortable around them, so I can be myself and enjoy singing more."

예시: Maybe I want to sing for my friends because I feel more comfortable around them, so I can be myself and enjoy singing more.

제안: Your answer is short and has minor grammatical errors. Try to expand your answer with specific details and use correct articles. For example, "Yes, singing songs together can create unforgettable memories and bring happiness to people because it helps us connect and enjoy the moment."

예시: Yes, singing songs together can create unforgettable memories and bring happiness to people because it helps us connect and enjoy the moment.

× In my past experience, when I singing, the audion always said that I'm like of emotion, but I don't know how to express my emotion into the song, so I don't have the confidence of singing.

✓ In my past experience, when I was singing, the audience always said that I lack emotion, but I don't know how to express my emotion in the song, so I don't have the confidence to sing.

The phrase 'when I singing' is incorrect because after 'when' we need a verb in the past continuous form 'was singing' to indicate an action in progress in the past. Also, 'audion' is a misspelling of 'audience'. 'I'm like of emotion' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I lack emotion' to express absence of emotion. 'Express my emotion into the song' should be 'express my emotion in the song' to use the correct preposition. 'Confidence of singing' should be 'confidence to sing' to use the correct preposition and verb form.

× No, I have found but in the future. Maybe I will spend. Some money on to check something in classes to improve how to express my emotion through the song.

✓ No, I haven't found any, but maybe in the future I will spend some money to attend classes to improve how to express my emotion through songs.

The sentence 'I have found but in the future' is incomplete and incorrect. The present perfect 'have found' needs an object; here, 'haven't found any' fits better. 'Maybe I will spend. Some money on to check something in classes' is fragmented and incorrect; it should be 'maybe I will spend some money to attend classes'. 'Through the song' should be plural 'through songs' to generalize the expression.

× Maybe my friends because I'm feel more comfortable in front of my friend so I will be less myself to sing. The song and more enjoyable to do it.

✓ Maybe my friends because I feel more comfortable in front of my friends, so I will be more myself when singing the song and it will be more enjoyable.

The phrase 'I'm feel' is incorrect; it should be 'I feel'. 'In front of my friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'my friends'. 'I will be less myself to sing' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'I will be more myself when singing'. The sentence 'The song and more enjoyable to do it' is fragmented and unclear; it should be 'it will be more enjoyable' to complete the thought.

× Yes, singing song together can make a unforgettable memory for us.

✓ Yes, singing songs together can create an unforgettable memory for us.

The phrase 'singing song' is incorrect; it should be plural 'singing songs' to indicate multiple songs or the activity in general. 'A unforgettable' is incorrect because 'unforgettable' starts with a vowel sound, so the article should be 'an'. Also, 'make a memory' is less natural than 'create a memory' in this context.