Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer should be clearer and more coherent. Try to form complete sentences and avoid hesitation. Also, explain why singing relaxes your mind with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress. For example, after a long day, singing my favourite songs calms my mind and lifts my mood.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response with clear supporting details. Explain when and how you learnt singing, and what you gained from it, using complete sentences and linking words.

예시: Yes, I have learnt how to sing when I was a child. Although it was not in a formal class, one of my teachers taught us some singing techniques, which helped me build confidence in singing.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples to enrich your response.

예시: I prefer to sing for my husband, and I often do. For instance, on his last birthday, I sang a special song for him, and he felt very happy and appreciated my effort.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and correct grammar. Try to express your thoughts in complete sentences, use linking words, and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it refreshes people's minds and reduces stress. For example, singing a favourite song can improve someone's mood and create joyful memories.

× And singing is a good thing to relax your mind.

✓ And singing is a good way to relax your mind.

The phrase 'a good thing to relax your mind' is awkward; 'a good way to relax your mind' is more natural and grammatically correct in this context.

× You do it work as a stress Buster for me and also.

✓ It works as a stress buster for me as well.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing auxiliary verbs. The corrected sentence uses proper subject-verb agreement and clearer structure.

× When you think, I guess you can. Can reason with you. From the.

✓ When you think, I guess you can reason with yourself.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction combines the ideas into a coherent sentence with proper pronoun use and verb structure.

× One of my teacher learned sorry teach us how to hard posting and that time.

✓ One of my teachers taught us how to do hard posting at that time.

The verb 'learned' is incorrectly used instead of 'taught' for the teacher's action. Also, 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to agree with 'one of my'. The phrase 'how to hard posting' is unclear and corrected to 'how to do hard posting'.

× I got something Trust in the singing.

✓ I gained some trust in singing.

The phrase 'got something Trust' is incorrect. 'Gained some trust' is a clearer and grammatically correct expression.

× I sing a song for him and he feels very happy and glad after her hearing the songs from my side.

✓ I sang a song for him and he felt very happy and glad after hearing the song from me.

The verb tense should be past ('sang', 'felt') to match the past event. 'After her hearing' is incorrect; it should be 'after hearing'. Also, 'songs' changed to singular 'song' for consistency.

× Because when people think they feel more refresh, they feel more happy.

✓ Because when people sing, they feel more refreshed and happier.

The verb 'think' is incorrect in context; it should be 'sing'. 'Refresh' is an adjective here and should be 'refreshed'. 'More happy' should be 'happier' for correct comparative form.

× It worked as a stress Buster for them.

✓ It works as a stress buster for them.

The sentence refers to a general truth, so present tense 'works' is appropriate. 'Stress Buster' should be lowercase unless a proper noun.

× They find their mood change and it would also think it.

✓ They find their mood changes, and it also helps them think clearly.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects verb forms.

× It also work as a memory for them.

✓ It also works as a memory for them.

Subject-verb agreement requires 'works' instead of 'work' for singular subject 'it'.