Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors which affect the natural flow. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid redundancy. For example, directly state why you like singing and give a simple reason or example. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and relax. I often sing along to my favourite songs when I'm alone, which makes me feel happy and calm.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly whether you have learnt singing or not, and add a simple reason or future intention. Use correct sentence structure and vocabulary.

예시: I haven't had formal singing lessons yet, but if I get the chance, I would definitely like to try learning how to sing properly.

제안: Your answer has some good ideas but is unclear and contains errors. Try to express your thoughts more clearly and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid unnecessary words and focus on answering the question directly.

예시: Although I'm not very skilled at singing, I would like to sing for my family and partner because singing helps me share my feelings and connect with them.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with a reason. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and feel more positive.

× Singing from my opinion is a very good white spread emotion or offer.

✓ In my opinion, singing is a very good way to spread emotion or offer.

The phrase 'white spread emotion or offer' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'a very good way to spread emotion or offer'. Also, 'from my opinion' should be 'in my opinion' as the correct prepositional phrase.

× I often sing along with my favorite songs even I'm not very scared it as a thing.

✓ I often sing along with my favorite songs even if I'm not very good at it.

The sentence uses 'even' incorrectly without 'if'. Also, 'scared it as a thing' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'good at it' to express ability.

× I have a lot how to send yet but if I have a chance I definitely good kid a try.

✓ I have not learnt how to sing yet, but if I have a chance, I will definitely give it a try.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'I have a lot how to send yet' is incorrect; it should be 'I have not learnt how to sing yet'. 'Good kid a try' is incorrect; it should be 'give it a try'. Also, commas are needed for clarity.

× Even though I'm not very skilled and singing, I would like to sing it to my family and my partner.

✓ Even though I'm not very skilled at singing, I would like to sing to my family and my partner.

The phrase 'skilled and singing' is incorrect; it should be 'skilled at singing'. Also, 'sing it to' is incorrect; 'sing to' is the correct form.

× Singing is very good, quiet is spread emotion and the feeling with MDOT connect together.

✓ Singing is very good; it quietly spreads emotion and connects feelings together.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Quiet is spread emotion' is incorrect; it should be 'it quietly spreads emotion'. 'The feeling with MDOT connect together' is unclear; corrected to 'connects feelings together'.

× Oh yes, singing can bring happiness to people or becaused singing is a way that people used to spread emotion of spread the filling.

✓ Oh yes, singing can bring happiness to people because singing is a way that people use to spread emotion or express feelings.

'Becaused' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'Used to spread emotion of spread the filling' is incorrect; it should be 'use to spread emotion or express feelings'. Also, 'used' should be 'use' to match present tense.