Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains several grammatical errors which affect the natural flow. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For instance, I often sing along to my favourite songs when I am driving, which makes the journey more enjoyable and less stressful.

제안: Your answer is quite short and contains some unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add a supporting detail using linking words. Keep your sentences simple and accurate.

예시: No, I haven't learnt how to sing professionally, but if I had the chance, I would like to try singing lessons to improve my skills.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear vocabulary and grammar errors. Focus on expressing your ideas clearly with correct sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific reasons or examples.

예시: Although I am not very skilled at singing, I would like to sing for my family or my partner because singing is a good way to express emotions and strengthen our bond.

제안: Your answer shows a good attempt to explain your opinion but is unclear and contains grammar mistakes. Try to organise your ideas logically using linking words and provide specific reasons or examples to support your answer.

예시: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness because it helps people release their emotions and feel refreshed. For example, singing a favourite song can lift your mood and make you feel more positive.

× I had really really insult singing becaused it helps me relax and describe my emotions even though I'm not very scared it.

✓ I really really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and describe my emotions even though I'm not very good at it.

The original sentence misuses 'insult' instead of 'enjoy' and 'scared' instead of 'good at'. The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by the '-ing' form 'singing'. Also, 'scared' is incorrect in this context; the correct phrase is 'good at it' to express skill level.

× I often sing along to my favorite song when I heard arriving car, which met those moments more enjoyable and less stressful.

✓ I often sing along to my favourite songs when I hear a car arriving, which makes those moments more enjoyable and less stressful.

The verb 'heard' should be in the present tense 'hear' to match the habitual action. 'Arriving car' needs an article 'a' and the phrase order is corrected to 'a car arriving'. 'Met' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'makes' to indicate causing the moments to be enjoyable.

× No, I haven't learn how to see in office only, but if I have a chance I would like to give it a try.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing officially, but if I have a chance I would like to give it a try.

The verb 'learn' should be in the past participle form 'learned' after 'haven't'. 'See' is incorrect; the intended verb is 'sing'. 'In office only' is unclear and corrected to 'officially' to convey formal learning.

× Even though I am not very skilled as singing as they want to sync to my family or my partner.

✓ Even though I am not very skilled at singing, I want to sing for my family or my partner.

The phrase 'as singing as they want to sync to' is incorrect and unclear. The correct preposition is 'skilled at singing'. 'Sync' is replaced with 'sing' to match the context. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× From my opinion singing is a very good quiet is Fred emotion and drained their canescent. Together.

✓ In my opinion, singing is a very good way to express emotions and relieve stress together.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains nonsensical phrases like 'quiet is Fred emotion' and 'drained their canescent'. It is restructured to a clear sentence expressing the intended meaning.

× Yes, definitely singing can bring happiness to people because when you think you release the energy inside and jobs can bring a new a fresh energy and yeah, just anything will make us feel happy.

✓ Yes, definitely singing can bring happiness to people because when you sing, you release the energy inside, and it can bring fresh energy, which makes us feel happy.

The phrase 'when you think you release' is incorrect; it should be 'when you sing, you release'. 'Jobs' is incorrect and removed. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct verb usage.