Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to give a clear and complete answer directly addressing the question. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. For example, start with a clear statement like 'Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax,' then briefly explain your feelings about your singing ability.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions, although I am not very confident in my singing abilities.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by avoiding hesitation sounds like 'uhm'. Also, try to use varied vocabulary and a more natural sentence structure.

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally, but if I had the chance, I would definitely like to try, even though I'm not very confident in my singing abilities.

제안: Focus on giving a clear and coherent answer. Avoid filler phrases like 'you know' and unclear expressions such as 'bringing singing camper'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons.

예시: Although I'm not confident in my singing ability, I would like to sing for my parents and my partner because singing is a great way to express feelings and strengthen the bond between family members.

제안: Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structures. Avoid mispronunciations or incorrect words like 'quiet' instead of 'way' and 'relist' instead of 'release'. Use linking words to explain your ideas clearly and provide specific reasons.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it is a good way to release energy and improve mood, helping people feel more joyful and relaxed.

× I to be honest, I like singing, but I am not confident in my singing abilities. I am, yes.

✓ To be honest, I like singing, but I am not confident in my singing abilities.

The original sentence has an incorrect word order with 'I to be honest' which is not grammatically correct. The phrase 'To be honest' should come at the beginning as an introductory phrase. Also, the phrase 'I am, yes' is unnecessary and awkward here, so it is removed for clarity and correctness.

× Uhm no I haven't learned how to sing but if I have a chance I would like to try even though I am not confident in my singing abilities.

✓ Uhm no, I haven't learned how to sing but if I have a chance, I would like to try even though I am not confident in my singing abilities.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs commas after 'no' and 'chance' to separate clauses properly. The verb tense 'haven't learned' is correct for past tense negative present perfect. The sentence structure is improved with punctuation.

× Even though I am not confident in my singing ability, I would like to sing for my parents, for my partner, from my opinion or singing, you know, very good way to express the feeling. Yeah, bringing singing camper in the deep connection between the family members.

✓ Even though I am not confident in my singing ability, I would like to sing for my parents and my partner. In my opinion, singing is a very good way to express feelings. Yes, singing brings a deep connection between family members.

The original sentence misuses prepositions such as 'from my opinion' which should be 'in my opinion'. The phrase 'bringing singing camper in the deep connection' is unclear and incorrect; it is corrected to 'singing brings a deep connection'. Also, the sentence is split for clarity and correct conjunction use.

× Oh yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. Singing is a very good quiet to release the energy inside and when you can relist anything the happiness will come. Apart from that thinking can lift the mode off and tear the people are.

✓ Oh yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. Singing is a very good way to release the energy inside and when you can release anything, happiness will come. Apart from that, singing can lift the mood of the people.

The original sentence contains incorrect word choices: 'quiet' should be 'way', 'relist' should be 'release', 'mode off' should be 'mood of', and 'tear the people are' is unclear and corrected to 'of the people'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.