Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免使用不准确的词汇，并且保持句子连贯。可以尝试用简单明了的句子表达喜欢唱歌的原因。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and improves my mental health.

제안: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议先直接回答问题，然后用连贯的句子说明原因，避免断断续续的表达。

예시: I have not had the chance to learn singing, but I have learned to play some instruments. I prefer learning instruments more than singing.

제안: 回答基本清楚，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意动词时态和介词的正确使用，同时丰富细节，使表达更自然。

예시: I would like to sing for my mom because she always takes care of me and supports me. Singing is my way to show gratitude to her.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达混乱，建议理清思路，使用正确的语法和连贯的句子表达观点，避免重复和不相关的内容。

예시: I think singing can help people relax and reduce stress when they are busy or facing problems. Music brings them peace and happiness.

× I do love singing as it can express my feelings and often can showcase my emotional.

✓ I do love singing as it can express my feelings and often can showcase my emotions.

这里“emotional”是形容词，但句中需要名词“emotions”来表示“情感”。应使用名词形式。

× Valca. Promote my mental health wellbeing.

✓ It also promotes my mental health and wellbeing.

原句结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不通顺。应补充完整句子结构。

× I have, I did not have the chance.

✓ I have not had the chance.

这里表达过去未发生的动作，应该用现在完成时的否定形式“have not had”，而不是“did not have”。

× But compared to saying I have some chance to learn how to play in instruments.

✓ But compared to that, I have had some chance to learn how to play instruments.

句子结构不完整且表达不清，应补充连接词和调整时态，使句子完整通顺。

× So I would like to. Learn how to play instruments rather than.

✓ So I would like to learn how to play instruments rather than singing.

句子断裂且不完整，应合并句子并补充完整的比较内容。

× I would like to sing to my mom as she always take care about me and always give me what I want.

✓ I would like to sing for my mom as she always takes care of me and always gives me what I want.

“sing for”表示为某人唱歌；“take care of”是固定搭配；动词需与主语一致，使用第三人称单数形式。

× So I want to express my a thankful feeling to her.

✓ So I want to express my thankful feelings to her.

“thankful”是形容词，修饰“feelings”，应使用复数形式“feelings”，且去掉多余的冠词“a”。

× I think that singing can really brings pressure to people as it allow people to unwind this when they have a tight schedule or whenever they encounter some difficulties.

✓ I think that singing can really bring pleasure to people as it allows people to unwind when they have a tight schedule or whenever they encounter some difficulties.

“can”后应接动词原形“bring”；“it”作为单数主语，动词用第三人称单数“allows”；“pressure”应为“pleasure”更符合语境。

× And it also. The coms of music also brings them peace.

✓ And the comfort of music also brings them peace.

句子断裂且单词拼写错误，“coms”应为“comfort”，并将句子合并使其完整。