Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и избыточность. Следует использовать более естественные выражения и избегать повторов, например, "I enjoy singing because it gives me energy". Также стоит сократить ответ до 3-4 предложений, чтобы он был более чётким и связным.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it gives me a lot of energy and makes me feel happy. It's my favorite hobby and I enjoy it very much.

제안: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и неясных выражений. Следует использовать правильные глаголы и более логичную структуру. Например, "I have never learned how to sing, but I want to try. I enjoy singing while doing my homework or housework."

예시: Actually, I have never taken singing lessons, but I want to learn. I often sing while doing my homework or housework because it makes me feel relaxed.

제안: Ответ не ясен и содержит ошибки. Следует прямо ответить на вопрос, например, "I want to sing for my family and friends because I want to share my happiness with them." Также можно добавить детали о кумирах, но связно и понятно.

예시: I want to sing for my family and friends because I enjoy sharing my happiness with them. Also, I admire Selena Gomez and hope to meet her someday.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Следует использовать правильные формы глаголов и более связные предложения. Например, "Yes, I think singing brings happiness because it helps people relax and relieve stress."

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and reduce stress. It gives positive energy and improves mood.

× Yes I do, I enjoy by singing and I think I'm good at singing and singing is my perfect hobby.

✓ Yes I do, I enjoy singing and I think I'm good at singing and singing is my perfect hobby.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed directly by the gerund form without the preposition 'by'. The phrase 'enjoy by singing' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoy singing'. This is a common error with verbs that are followed by gerunds.

× To tell the truth, I have never learned how to say, but I I will try.

✓ To tell the truth, I have never learned how to sing, but I will try.

The word 'say' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'sing' because the question is about singing. Also, 'learned' is correctly used in present perfect tense here. The error is lexical rather than grammatical, but correcting the verb is necessary for meaning.

× It's just hold before me and I love singing while doing my homework or like while doing housework.

✓ It's just ahead of me and I love singing while doing my homework or housework.

The phrase 'It's just hold before me' is ungrammatical and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'It's just ahead of me' or 'It's just in front of me'. Also, 'or like while doing housework' is awkward; 'or housework' suffices. This correction improves clarity and grammatical structure.

× I really appreciate Selena Gomez of all of your songs and I really. Who wanna sing for sure, and I have a big plan to meet with her in the future.

✓ I really appreciate Selena Gomez and all of her songs, and I really want to sing for sure, and I have a big plan to meet her in the future.

The phrase 'of all of your songs' is incorrect; it should be 'and all of her songs' to refer to Selena Gomez's songs. 'Who wanna sing' is incorrect; it should be 'I really want to sing'. Also, 'meet with her' is better as 'meet her' in this context. These corrections fix pronoun misuse and improve sentence clarity.

× Exactly, I think so singing give energy and give happiness for people because it's kind of relax and real life stress.

✓ Exactly, I think singing gives energy and happiness to people because it kind of relaxes and relieves real life stress.

The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'singing' (third person singular). Also, 'it's kind of relax' is incorrect; it should be 'it kind of relaxes' or 'it is relaxing'. The phrase 'real life stress' needs a verb like 'relieves' to complete the meaning. These corrections address subject-verb agreement and verb form errors.

× And then? It is the best energy for people to. Get energy.

✓ And then, it is the best way for people to get energy.

The phrase 'the best energy for people to get energy' is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Best energy' should be 'best way' or 'best source'. Also, the preposition 'for' is correctly used, but the sentence structure is incomplete and needs correction for clarity and grammaticality.