Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但句子结构不够清晰，语法错误较多，且内容重复。建议简化句子，直接表达观点，并用具体细节支持，同时注意时态和语法的正确使用。

예시: Yes, I like singing because I have been singing since I was a child. Performing on stage made me feel proud and happy, and my parents were always supportive.

제안: 回答不连贯，表达不清楚，缺乏完整句子和逻辑。建议用完整句子回答，明确说明学习唱歌的经历和从谁那里学到的具体内容。

예시: Yes, I have learned how to sing from my mother, who taught me important techniques and helped me improve my voice.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，说明想为谁唱歌，并解释原因，使用连贯的句子。

예시: I want to sing for my mother because I want to show her my love and appreciation through my singing.

제안: 回答内容不够清晰，表达混乱，缺乏具体细节。建议用清晰的句子表达观点，解释为什么唱歌能带来快乐，并举例说明。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because singers use their voices to express emotions, which helps connect with the audience and lift their spirits.

× Of course I like singing because when I was a child I'm a little singer.

✓ Of course I like singing because when I was a child I was a little singer.

这里时态不一致，前半句是过去时态，后半句却用了现在时态“I'm”，应改为过去时态“I was”。

× In one hour on the stage in when I was singing, I feel very proud of myself.

✓ During the one hour on the stage when I was singing, I felt very proud of myself.

句中时态混乱，描述过去的经历应使用过去时态，故“feel”应改为“felt”。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing? Student: Of course, my mother. Everett, too. Let's uh, teacher to touch me that something. Important to sing and I learned a lot from her.

✓ Of course, my mother and Everett too. They are my teachers who taught me important things about singing, and I learned a lot from them.

原句结构混乱，缺少主谓宾，且表达不清晰。需要调整句子结构，使其完整且通顺。

× Who do you want to sing for? Student: To be honest, I really want to sing for my mom because. Am I want to sing for her, feeding her love and anything else?

✓ To be honest, I really want to sing for my mom because I want to express my love and care for her.

原句中“Am I want to sing for her”使用错误的代词和语序，应改为“I want to sing for her”。

× Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness or activity to people 'cause some singer old.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness or energy to people because some singers are old.

“activity”用词不当，应为“energy”；“'cause”应为“because”；“some singer old”缺少谓语，应为“some singers are old”。

× A low sound feelings on their field of voice, so the singer. Always connect the audience by their voice.

✓ A low sound feeling in their vocal range allows singers to always connect with the audience through their voice.

原句断句错误，缺少连贯性，需调整句子结构使其完整且通顺。