Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，存在语法和词汇错误。建议简化句子结构，使用简单且准确的表达，避免冗余。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and helps me connect with my friends. Singing together can strengthen our relationships and create a joyful atmosphere.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确的问题。建议直接回答问题，并用简单句说明原因或愿望，避免使用不恰当的词汇。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally. However, if I have the chance, I would like to learn proper singing techniques to improve my skills.

제안: 回答内容较为混乱，语法和词汇使用不当。建议使用连贯的句子，明确表达想为谁唱歌及原因。

예시: I would like to sing for my friends and family because singing can create a joyful atmosphere and bring us closer together, even if I'm not a great singer.

제안: 回答不连贯且含糊，语法错误较多。建议用简洁明了的句子表达观点，并给出具体理由。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people feel connected and enjoy the moment together.

× Actually, I'm a real buff of saying things.

✓ Actually, I'm a real buff of singing.

这里'saying things'用法不正确，应该用动名词形式'singing'表示喜欢唱歌。动词后面接动名词表示兴趣爱好。

× Not only I could acquire a sense of hapiness and forth humans when I am seeing some to my companions, but also.

✓ Not only could I acquire a sense of happiness and warmth for humans when I am singing to my companions, but also.

原句中'forth humans'和'seeing some to my companions'用词错误，应该是'and warmth for humans'和'singing to my companions'，表达更准确。

× Not only I could acquire a sense of hapiness and forth humans when I am seeing some to my companions, but also.

✓ Not only could I acquire a sense of happiness and warmth for humans when I am singing to my companions, but I could also strengthen the relationship between them.

原句结构不完整，缺少后半句内容，且'Not only'后应倒装，需调整句子结构使其完整且语法正确。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'learnt'是英式英语过去分词，若使用美式英语应用'learned'，根据上下文选择一致的时态形式。

× Ever learn how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

该句缺少助动词和主语，完整疑问句应为'Have you ever learned how to sing?'。

× But if I have the opportunity, I would like to learn more professional technique about seeing the future.

✓ But if I have the opportunity, I would like to learn more professional techniques about singing.

'technique about seeing the future'用词错误，应为'professional techniques about singing'，表达学习唱歌的专业技巧。

× I'd like to sing a song for my companions and relatives.

✓ I'd like to sing a song for my friends and relatives.

'companions'用词不太自然，通常用'friends'表示朋友，更符合口语表达习惯。

× I believe that we may have a will of time there.

✓ I believe that we may have a good time there.

'a will of time'表达错误，应为'a good time'表示愉快的时光。

× Even though I'm not so great singer.

✓ Even though I'm not a great singer.

缺少冠词'a'，'great singer'前应加不定冠词。

× Sing can create joyful atmosphere and bring us closer.

✓ Singing can create a joyful atmosphere and bring us closer.

'Sing'作为动词原形用在此处不合适，应使用动名词'Singing'作主语，且'atmosphere'前需加冠词'a'。

× It is simple way to share hapiness.

✓ It is a simple way to share happiness.

缺少冠词'a'，且'hapiness'拼写错误，应为'happiness'。

× It's definitely can do this.

✓ It definitely can do this.

情态动词'can'前不应加助动词'is'，应直接用'It definitely can do this.'。

× Things to some extent it can strengthen the relationship between single and the audience.

✓ To some extent, it can strengthen the relationship between the singer and the audience.

句子结构混乱，'Things to some extent'不合适，应调整为'To some extent, it can...'，且'single'应为'singer'。

× It could also. Lights everyone acquire a sense of. You know, for a few months and joyful.

✓ It could also help everyone acquire a sense of joy and happiness.

原句断句错误且用词不当，应合并为完整句子，表达清晰。