Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains incorrect words which affect the naturalness and effectiveness. Please respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and provide specific reasons using correct vocabulary. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and relax after a long day.

제안: Your answer is somewhat relevant but the sentence structure is incorrect and unclear. Please respond directly with a clear topic sentence and add supporting details using proper linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in 9th standard during my music class, which helped me understand basic singing techniques.

제안: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Please provide a clear topic sentence stating who you want to sing for, followed by specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I prefer to sing for my family because they support me and enjoy listening to my songs.

제안: Your answer has some relevant ideas but is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Please give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using appropriate linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word usage.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their feelings and enjoy music, which can improve their mood.

× Yes, I like kissing you because you're biasing.

✓ Yes, I like singing because you are inspiring.

The word 'biasing' is incorrectly used as an adjective here; the correct adjective is 'inspiring' to express motivation. Also, 'kissing you' is inappropriate in this context; the question is about singing, so 'singing' is the correct verb. Use of correct adjectives and verbs improves clarity and relevance.

× Yes, so you have learned in my 9th standard in my music class.

✓ Yes, I learned in my 9th standard music class.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'you have learned' instead of 'I learned'. The past simple tense 'learned' is appropriate here to indicate a completed action in the past. Also, 'so' is unnecessary and 'in my 9th standard music class' is the correct phrase.

× Are you generally prefer to Singapore myself? Because I know my feelings as well as I know all about me, so that's why I prefer to sing about me.

✓ I generally prefer to sing for myself because I know my feelings well and I know all about myself, so that's why I prefer to sing about myself.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and pronoun use. 'Are you generally prefer' is incorrect; it should be 'I generally prefer'. 'To Singapore myself' is incorrect; likely intended 'to sing for myself'. Also, 'about me' should be 'about myself' for reflexive pronoun correctness. Correct sentence structure and pronoun use improve clarity.

× Yes, I think it's thinking and bring happiness to people becauses by singing feelings can be expressed as well as some people feel like suppressor listening music.

✓ Yes, I think singing brings happiness to people because through singing, feelings can be expressed, and some people feel like they are relieved by listening to music.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'it's thinking' is incorrect; it should be 'singing brings'. 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'Suppressor' is incorrect; likely intended 'relieved' or 'comforted'. The sentence structure is also confusing. Correcting these improves meaning and grammatical accuracy.