Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid unclear phrases like 'not that much suture the field'. Instead, express your opinion directly and simply.

예시: No, I don't like singing because I think my voice is not suitable for singing. I prefer to listen to music rather than sing myself.

제안: Focus on answering the question directly and avoid confusing or incomplete sentences. Use simple and clear language to explain your experience.

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I usually just listen to songs on YouTube for fun.

제안: Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid repetition. Also, correct grammar and vocabulary will improve clarity.

예시: If I were to sing for someone, I would choose my boyfriend because he always encourages me. Even if my singing is not perfect, he appreciates it, especially when I sing birthday songs for him.

제안: Make your answer more structured by starting with a clear opinion, then supporting it with reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness. For example, when we sing while doing small tasks, it helps us feel relaxed and enjoy our work more.

× Well, I don't like to sing because I think that my voice is not that much suture the field of singing and music.

✓ Well, I don't like to sing because I think that my voice is not that much suited to the field of singing and music.

The verb 'suture' is incorrect here; the correct past participle form 'suited' should be used to describe compatibility. Also, the preposition 'to' is needed after 'suited' to indicate the field. This is a combination of verb form and preposition usage errors.

× So I like to see, but I don't like to try it.

✓ So I like to sing, but I don't like to try it.

The verb 'see' is incorrect in this context; the intended verb is likely 'sing'. This is a vocabulary choice error rather than a grammar problem, but correcting it is necessary for clarity.

× No, I didn't ever learn to sing or something like this in music sector or field but we just listen to the music and songs from YouTube.

✓ No, I have never learned to sing or anything like that in the music sector or field, but we just listen to music and songs from YouTube.

The sentence uses 'didn't ever learn' which is less natural; the present perfect 'have never learned' is more appropriate for experiences up to now. Also, 'learned' is the preferred past participle in American English. 'Anything like that' is more natural than 'something like this'. 'The music sector or field' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Listen to the music' should be 'listen to music' when speaking generally.

× But to be like honest you have some classes or some specific signal.

✓ But to be honest, you need some classes or some specific training.

The phrase 'to be like honest' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to be honest'. Also, 'you have some classes' is awkward; 'you need some classes' fits better. 'Specific signal' is incorrect; likely 'specific training' or 'lessons' is intended.

× If I choose to sing a song for someone, so I will sing for my boyfriend of course, because I know that even though my voice is not that much good or suit the song, he will just give me a good compliment.

✓ If I choose to sing a song for someone, I will sing for my boyfriend, of course, because I know that even though my voice is not that good or suited to the song, he will just give me a good compliment.

The conjunction 'so' after 'if' is unnecessary and incorrect. 'Not that much good' should be 'not that good'. 'Suit the song' should be 'suited to the song' with the correct past participle and preposition.

× For example, if I just sing a birthday song, he will just love and give me a good compliments.

✓ For example, if I just sing a birthday song, he will just love it and give me good compliments.

'A good compliments' is incorrect because 'compliments' is plural and 'a' is singular. It should be 'good compliments' without 'a'. Also, adding 'it' after 'love' clarifies the object.

× Not that much of happenings, but I think that sometimes when we are working or doing some kind of a small task and we are just singing by ourselves and in our comfort zone.

✓ Not that much happens, but I think that sometimes when we are working or doing some kind of small task and we are just singing by ourselves in our comfort zone.

'Not that much of happenings' is incorrect; 'happenings' is a plural noun and the phrase is awkward. 'Not that much happens' is a better expression. Also, 'some kind of a small task' should be 'some kind of small task' without the article 'a'.

× So we feel ourselves that we are busy and relaxing and just enjoying the what we are doing.

✓ So we feel that we are busy and relaxed and just enjoying what we are doing.

'Feel ourselves that' is incorrect; it should be 'feel that'. 'Relaxing' is a present participle meaning causing relaxation; the adjective 'relaxed' describes the state. 'The what' is incorrect; 'what' alone is correct.

× So sometimes I feel like, yes, it's give that.

✓ So sometimes I feel like, yes, it gives that.

'It's give' is incorrect; the verb should be in third person singular present tense 'gives'. This is a subject-verb agreement and verb form error.