Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が断片的で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然で効果的な英語表現を使い、文をつなげて一貫性を持たせることが必要です。例えば、感情や理由を明確に述べ、冗長な表現を避けましょう。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it makes me feel relaxed and happy. Especially when I sing songs that express my true feelings, I feel very comfortable. I try to sing often to improve my skills.

제안: 文法の誤り（時制や動詞の形）を修正し、文をつなげて自然な流れにしましょう。また、具体的な経験や影響を詳しく述べると良いです。

예시: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but my mother sings well. When I was a child, she taught me how to sing properly, which has helped me improve my singing skills.

제안: 「think for my family」は不自然な表現です。より適切な表現を使い、理由や感情を明確に述べましょう。また、文のつながりを良くするために接続詞を使うと効果的です。

예시: I want to sing for my family because they always support and encourage me. I am really grateful for their constant motivation, and singing for them makes me feel happy and appreciated.

제안: 「differently」や「I feel weather」は意味が不明瞭です。正しい語彙を使い、文法を整え、理由や効果を具体的に説明しましょう。

예시: Yes, definitely. When I feel down, I listen to music because it helps me feel better and stay motivated. Singing can bring happiness to people by lifting their spirits.

× When I sing a song, I feel very comfortable and. Relax.

✓ When I sing a song, I feel very comfortable and relaxed.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. 'and. Relax.' is not a proper continuation. The correct form is to use 'relaxed' as an adjective to describe the feeling, making the sentence complete and grammatically correct.

× Especially when I feels truthful.

✓ Especially when I feel truthful.

The verb 'feel' should be in the base form 'feel' to agree with the first person singular subject 'I'. Using 'feels' is incorrect because 'feels' is for third person singular subjects.

× I tried to sing a lot.

✓ I try to sing a lot.

The question is about a general habit or preference, so the present tense 'try' is appropriate rather than the past tense 'tried'. Using past tense implies a completed action, which does not fit the context.

× No, I've never learned singing but my mother can sing well so when I was a child she teach me how to sing well and it helps me now.

✓ No, I've never learned singing but my mother can sing well so when I was a child she taught me how to sing well and it helps me now.

The verb 'teach' should be in the past tense 'taught' to agree with the past time reference 'when I was a child'. Using 'teach' is incorrect in this context.

× I'll try to think for my family because they always support and encourage me.

✓ I'll try to sing for my family because they always support and encourage me.

The question asks 'Who do you want to sing for?' so the answer should mention singing for the family. 'Try to think for my family' is incorrect and does not answer the question properly.

× Thinking for them makes me feel happy and appreciate it.

✓ Thinking about them makes me feel happy and appreciate it.

The correct preposition after 'thinking' when referring to someone is 'about', not 'for'. 'Thinking for them' is incorrect in this context.

× Yes, differently.

✓ Yes, definitely.

The word 'differently' is an adverb meaning 'in a different way' and does not fit the intended meaning. The correct word is 'definitely' meaning 'certainly' or 'yes' emphatically.

× When I feel down, I tried to listen to music because it helps me.

✓ When I feel down, I try to listen to music because it helps me.

The sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'try' is appropriate instead of the past tense 'tried'.

× And I feel weather.

✓ And I feel better.

The word 'weather' is a noun referring to atmospheric conditions and is incorrect here. The correct word is 'better', an adjective describing improved feelings.