Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当的问题，导致表达不够自然和清晰。建议加强基础语法学习，避免重复和冗余，使用更准确的词汇表达情感，例如用"singing"代替"seeing"。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it is a great way to express my feelings and emotions. For example, when I feel stressed or upset, singing a song helps me feel more relaxed and peaceful.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，且表达不连贯，影响理解。建议练习句子结构，注意时态和单复数形式，避免拼写错误。回答应简洁明了，直接回应问题。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary school during music classes. However, I have not taken any formal singing lessons since then.

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子结构，避免重复，清晰表达观点。

예시: Actually, I prefer to sing for myself because it helps me express my feelings and feel relaxed. I feel more comfortable singing alone without worrying about others' opinions.

제안: 回答中有词汇错误和重复，影响表达效果。建议注意词汇的准确使用，避免重复，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it is a wonderful way to express emotions. Whether you listen to music or sing a song, it can make people feel peaceful and joyful.

× I like the same because seeing is a good way to express the people's feelings and emotions.

✓ I like the same because singing is a good way to express people's feelings and emotions.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，因为题目是关于唱歌，且动名词用来表示动作的名称。

× I like the same because seeing is a good way to express the people's feelings and emotions.

✓ I like the same because singing is a good way to express people's feelings and emotions.

'the people's'中不需要定冠词'the'，应直接用'people's'表示一般人们的感情。

× An if.

✓ And if.

这里应为连词'and'，而不是'An'，且句子不完整，应与后文连贯。

× For example, if you feel stress forward and upset and you can sing a song to make yourself feel comfortable or feel peaceful.

✓ For example, if you feel stressed or upset, you can sing a song to make yourself feel comfortable or peaceful.

'stress forward'错误，应为形容词过去分词'stressed'，且连接词用'or'更合适，句子结构更通顺。

× I learned how to sing when I was a student especially during the junior oil or primary school an we had music class classes while I am using teacher told us how to see in.

✓ I learned how to sing when I was a student, especially during junior high or primary school, and we had music classes while my teacher told us how to sing.

时态应保持过去时，'am using'错误，应为过去时，且拼写错误'see in'应为'sing'。

× an we had music class classes

✓ and we had music classes

重复使用'class'，应使用复数形式'classes'，且连词应为'and'。

× while I am using teacher told us how to see in.

✓ while my teacher told us how to sing.

'I am using teacher'语法错误，应为'my teacher'，且动词用过去时。

× Yeah, after that I haven't a formal class lessons to learn how to swim.

✓ Yeah, after that I haven't had formal lessons to learn how to sing.

时态错误，'haven't'后应接过去分词'had'，且'lessons'复数，'swim'应为'sing'。

× Actually I want to sing for myself because same for myself is a good way to express my feelings and and me feel relaxed.

✓ Actually, I want to sing for myself because singing for myself is a good way to express my feelings and makes me feel relaxed.

'same for myself'应为'singing for myself'，且'and me feel relaxed'应改为'makes me feel relaxed'。

× I feel more comfortable when I sing alone without worrying about others opinion.

✓ I feel more comfortable when I sing alone without worrying about others' opinions.

'others opinion'应为复数所有格'others' opinions'。

× Saying for myself it is a good way to express my feelings and.

✓ Singing for myself is a good way to express my feelings.

句子不完整，'Saying'应为'Singing'，且去掉多余的'and'。

× Yes, I do think, think and bring happiness to people because seeing is a is a title way to express feelings.

✓ Yes, I do think singing can bring happiness to people because singing is a good way to express feelings.

'seeing'应为'singing'，'title way'应为'good way'，且句子重复。

× Now whatever you listen to music or sing a song and they all can bring happiness to people and they will make people feel peaceful and happy.

✓ Now, whether you listen to music or sing a song, both can bring happiness to people and make them feel peaceful and happy.

'whatever'用法不当，应为'whether'，且'and they all'改为'both'，'they will make people'改为'make them'更准确。