Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

× I don't like sending because my voice is on it.

✓ I don't like singing because my voice is not good enough.

The word 'sending' is incorrect here; the correct present participle form related to the activity is 'singing'. The phrase 'my voice is on it' is unclear and ungrammatical; it should be replaced with a clearer expression such as 'my voice is not good enough'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Good enough to send.

✓ My voice is not good enough to sing.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. It should be combined with the previous sentence or rewritten to form a complete sentence. The correction provides a complete sentence with subject and verb, improving grammatical correctness.

× I mean when I want to sing something just just for. Just for fun, my friends always stop me that you are making.

✓ I mean, when I want to sing something just for fun, my friends always stop me and say that I am making noise.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Just just for. Just for fun' is repetitive and incomplete. Also, 'my friends always stop me that you are making' is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness, adding necessary conjunctions and correcting pronouns.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'Learnt' is a British English past participle form, while 'learned' is the American English form. Both are correct, but consistency is important. If the rest of the transcript uses American English, 'learned' is preferred. This correction aligns with American English usage.

× Uh, yes, actual like it was on the like something professional.

✓ Uh, yes, actually it was something professional.

The original sentence contains filler words and unclear phrasing ('actual like it was on the like'). The correction removes unnecessary fillers and clarifies the meaning, resulting in a grammatically correct sentence.

× But when I was at school we had a music lesson of music class that our teacher, our everyday or every lesson our teacher tried to try to learn teach us how to sing.

✓ But when I was at school, we had a music class where our teacher tried to teach us how to sing every lesson.

The phrase 'music lesson of music class' is redundant and incorrect. 'Our everyday or every lesson' is awkward and unclear. The correction simplifies and clarifies the sentence, using correct prepositions and word order.

× But it was helpful for me.

✓ It was helpful for me.

Starting a sentence with 'But' is acceptable in informal speech, but in formal writing it is better to omit it if the sentence stands alone. The correction removes 'But' for clarity and formality.

× I would like to sing for my boyfriend 'cause he said he has a talent at singing in his.

✓ I would like to sing for my boyfriend because he said he has a talent for singing.

The phrase 'talent at singing in his' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'talent for singing'. Also, 'cause' should be expanded to 'because' for clarity. The correction fixes pronoun and preposition usage.

× He think he thinks a a good songs for me but I would love to do it as well As for him.

✓ He thinks of good songs for me, and I would love to do it for him as well.

The original sentence has repeated words ('a a'), incorrect verb form ('He think'), and unclear phrasing ('as well As for him'). The correction fixes subject-verb agreement, removes repetition, and clarifies meaning.

× Yes actually like when you sing it fills you start feeling more energetic and positive.

✓ Yes, actually, when you sing, it makes you start feeling more energetic and positive.

The original sentence is missing commas and has awkward phrasing ('it fills you start feeling'). The correction adds commas for clarity and replaces 'fills' with 'makes' to correctly express causation.

× Like it actually depends on the what kind of music songs you're thinking.

✓ It actually depends on what kind of music or songs you're listening to.

The phrase 'the what kind' is incorrect; 'the' should be removed. Also, 'thinking' is incorrect in this context; 'listening to' is appropriate when referring to music. The correction fixes article usage and verb choice.

× If it's depressing songs of course you'll side but if it's happy an.

✓ If they are depressing songs, of course you'll feel sad, but if they are happy songs, you'll feel happy.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'If it's depressing songs' mixes singular 'it' with plural 'songs'. 'You'll side' is incorrect; likely intended 'you'll feel sad'. The correction fixes subject-verb agreement, completes the sentence, and clarifies meaning.