Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response with simple sentences. For example, start with 'Yes, I like singing because...' and explain why you like it.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it makes me happy. I want to be a singer in the future, so I enjoy practicing singing every day.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has some grammar mistakes and redundancy. Use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I have learned how to sing from my school teacher and also from online platforms like YouTube. These resources have helped me improve my singing skills.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct answer and explain your reason clearly using simple sentences and linking words.

예시: I want to sing for myself because singing helps me feel relaxed and peaceful. It is a way for me to enjoy and express my emotions.

제안: Your answer is confusing and has many errors. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons. Use linking words to organize your ideas.

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and feel peaceful. Different types of songs, like love songs or emotional songs, can touch people's hearts and make them happy.

× Is I like singing God, it's my person.

✓ I like singing a lot, it's my passion.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Is I' instead of 'I'. Also, 'God' and 'my person' are incorrect in this context. The correct pronoun usage is 'I like singing a lot' and 'it's my passion'.

× From Tyler.

✓ From Taylor.

'Tyler' seems to be a mispronunciation or misspelling. Possibly the student meant 'Taylor' or another name. Also, the phrase 'From Tyler' is incomplete and unclear. It should be clarified or removed.

× I want to be a singer, so I'm interested in singing.

✓ I want to be a singer, so I am interested in singing.

Contraction 'I'm' is acceptable but for clarity, 'I am' is better. No major error here, but the sentence is fine as corrected.

× Yes, I've learned from various platforms like YouTube and other many platforms.

✓ Yes, I've learned from various platforms like YouTube and many others.

The phrase 'other many platforms' is incorrect. The correct order is 'many other platforms'. Also, 'I've learned' is correct present perfect tense.

× I have learn singing from my school teacher also.

✓ I have learned singing from my school teacher as well.

'Have learn' is incorrect; the past participle 'learned' should be used after 'have'. Also, 'also' is better replaced with 'as well' at the end.

× I think for myself it makes me relaxed.

✓ I think singing makes me feel relaxed.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. The subject and object are misplaced. Correct structure is 'singing makes me feel relaxed'.

× And peace sometimes they may be.

✓ And sometimes it brings me peace.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Peace' is a noun and needs a verb like 'brings'. 'They may be' is incorrect here.

× Not booting.

✓ Not boasting.

The word 'booting' is incorrect; likely the student meant 'boasting'. Also, the phrase is incomplete and should be connected properly.

× Is singing in bring happiness to people because it it makes people relax and peace?

✓ Singing brings happiness to people because it makes them feel relaxed and peaceful.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and repeated words ('it it'). 'Is singing in bring' is incorrect; correct is 'Singing brings'. Also, 'relax and peace' should be 'relaxed and peaceful'.

× Diggin German types of songs with Weekend.

✓ I enjoy German types of songs and songs by The Weeknd.

'Diggin' is informal and misspelled; 'Weekend' likely refers to 'The Weeknd' (the singer). The preposition 'with' is incorrect here.

× Sing like love songs, emotional songs.

✓ I like to sing love songs and emotional songs.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb. Correct sentence includes subject 'I' and verb 'like to sing'.

× There period various steps of songs.

✓ There are various types of songs.

The phrase 'There period various steps of songs' is ungrammatical and unclear. Correct is 'There are various types of songs'.