Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“helps me risk”应为“helps me relax”。建议注意语法准确性，避免拼写错误，并使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Whenever I sing, I feel happier and more peaceful.

제안: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，且有拼写错误（如“seeing”应为“singing”）。建议简洁明了地回答问题，注意语法和拼写，避免冗余。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I usually sing for fun during my free time without formal training.

제안: 回答较为自然，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯，同时避免重复。建议适当丰富细节，使回答更具体。

예시: I prefer singing alone rather than for others because it makes me feel relaxed. For example, I often sing in the shower when no one is around.

제안: 回答中有拼写错误（“Saying”应为“Singing”），且表达略显重复。建议注意拼写，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并丰富内容。

예시: Of course, singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their feelings. Whenever I sing, I feel relaxed and joyful.

× Actually I like singing because I feel better when I sing songs and it helps me risk. Relax and express my feelings.

✓ Actually, I like singing because I feel better when I sing songs, and it helps me relax and express my feelings.

原句中“helps me risk. Relax and express my feelings.”结构混乱，risk应为relax，且句子断开不完整。应将其合并为一个完整句子，表达清晰。

× Actually not, I prefer seeing in my free time but I actually not getting any courses of things skills or other knowing the musical rhythm knowledge.

✓ Actually not, I prefer singing in my free time but I have not taken any courses on singing skills or musical rhythm knowledge.

原句中“actually not getting”时态错误，应使用现在完成时“have not taken”表示至今未参加过课程。

× I actually not getting any courses of things skills or other knowing the musical rhythm knowledge.

✓ I have not taken any courses on singing skills or other knowledge about musical rhythm.

“courses of things skills”搭配错误，应使用“courses on singing skills”；“other knowing the musical rhythm knowledge”表达不当，应改为“other knowledge about musical rhythm”。

× I prefer seeing in my free time but I actually not getting any courses of things skills or other knowing the musical rhythm knowledge.

✓ I prefer singing in my free time but I have not taken any courses on singing skills or other knowledge about musical rhythm.

“prefer seeing in my free time”中的“seeing”应为“singing”，且“in my free time”是正确的介词短语。

× I don't want to sing for anyone. I prefer singing by myself, just like I will sing a song when I'm taking a shower.

✓ I don't want to sing for anyone. I prefer singing by myself, just like I sing a song when I'm taking a shower.

“I will sing”在此处表达习惯动作，应使用一般现在时“I sing”。

× Saying is a very good choice for people to express their feeling.

✓ Singing is a very good choice for people to express their feelings.

“Saying”应为“Singing”，且“feeling”应为复数“feelings”，表示多种感情。

× Every time I sing a song, I just feel very relaxing.

✓ Every time I sing a song, I just feel very relaxed.

“feel relaxing”错误，应该用形容词“relaxed”来描述人的感受。

× Ann. I can express my feeling very well.

✓ And I can express my feelings very well.

“Ann.”应为连词“And”，且“feeling”应为复数“feelings”，句子结构需连贯。