Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'since childhood' twice. Also, correct phrases like 'stress Buster' to 'stress buster' and complete incomplete sentences. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I like singing because I have enjoyed it since childhood. It is one of my favourite leisure activities, and I often play the guitar while singing, which helps me relieve stress.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms like 'have seen' instead of 'seen'. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: I haven't taken any personal singing classes, but I have watched videos on YouTube and other singing apps to practice and improve my skills.

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid repeating prepositions like 'for'. Also, organise your ideas logically using linking words. Try to be more specific and clear in your response.

예시: I don't sing for any particular person, but mostly for my family, especially my mother and father. When I have little time, I sing for myself. Additionally, I often sing for my friends when we go out together.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect points. Avoid incomplete sentences and incorrect word choices like 'Air each person happy'.

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because music is loved by everyone. Singing and listening to music can improve people's mood and act as a stress buster in their lives.

× From the childhood, I've been singing.

✓ Since childhood, I've been singing.

The phrase 'from the childhood' is incorrect; the correct preposition to indicate the starting point of an action continuing to the present is 'since'. Hence, 'Since childhood' is appropriate.

× I also play guitar while singing.

✓ I also play the guitar while singing.

When referring to playing a musical instrument, the definite article 'the' is used before the instrument name. So, it should be 'play the guitar'.

× It gives me a stress Buster as a.

✓ It gives me a stress buster.

The phrase 'as a' is incomplete and unnecessary here. Also, 'stress buster' should not be capitalized. The sentence should be concise and clear.

× I didn't take any personal classes in learning singing, but I seen videos on YouTube and other platforms of singing applications for my singing practice.

✓ I didn't take any personal classes in learning singing, but I have seen videos on YouTube and other platforms of singing applications for my singing practice.

The verb 'seen' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Since the action relates to experience, 'have seen' is correct.

× There is no particular person for with whom I sing for.

✓ There is no particular person with whom I sing.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly repeated and misplaced. The correct phrase is 'with whom I sing' without the extra 'for'.

× I usually sing for myself when I have little time.

✓ I usually sing to myself when I have little time.

The correct preposition when referring to singing directed at oneself is 'to', not 'for'.

× For my friends, whenever we go, we are going outing, I think for them.

✓ For my friends, whenever we go out, I sing for them.

The phrase 'we are going outing' is incorrect; it should be 'we go out'. Also, 'I think for them' is unclear and should be replaced with 'I sing for them' to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, singing brings happiness to people because music is everyone's favorite and saying, listening, singing both makes people.

✓ Yes, singing brings happiness to people because music is everyone's favorite, and singing, listening, and playing all make people happy.

The sentence is unclear and has pronoun and word choice issues. 'Saying' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. Also, the verb agreement and sentence structure need correction for clarity.

× Air each person happy in their life and it swings the mood and it acts as a stress Buster.

✓ It makes each person happy in their life, lifts the mood, and acts as a stress buster.

The phrase 'Air each person happy' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'makes each person happy'. Also, 'swings the mood' is incorrect; 'lifts the mood' or 'improves the mood' is appropriate. 'Stress Buster' should not be capitalized.