Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'sometimes saying' nên là 'sometimes sing'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy. Although I have other hobbies now, I still enjoy singing occasionally when I'm alone or with close friends.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'fund' thay vì 'fun', 'single' thay vì 'singing'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, chính xác và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ vựng sai. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I have joined some local singing contests. Singing helps me express my emotions, so it has become an important hobby for me even without professional training.

제안: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ như 'In my close friends, there are the people who support me a lot' nên sửa lại cho tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I have never thought about it before, but if I had the chance, I would like to sing for my family and close friends because they support me a lot. Singing for them would make me feel confident and show my appreciation for their love.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'stinging' thay vì 'singing', câu cuối không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi chính tả. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I believe singing brings happiness because it helps people express their feelings and connect with others. For example, when I sing with my friends or family, it creates a joyful atmosphere and we share positive emotions together.

× Still, I sometimes saying just for fun when I'm alone or with my close friends.

✓ Still, I sometimes sing just for fun when I'm alone or with my close friends.

The verb 'saying' is incorrectly used here; the correct form is the base verb 'sing' after 'sometimes' to indicate habitual action. 'Sometimes' is followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form.

× Well, about I have never taken formal singing lessons, I have participated in several singing contest in my neighborhood which was quite fund and I haven't practicing it on my own because it helped me realize and express my emotions more freely.

✓ Well, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I have participated in several singing contests in my neighborhood which was quite fun and I haven't practiced it on my own because it helped me realize and express my emotions more freely.

The phrase 'about I have never' is incorrect; 'about' should be removed. 'Contest' should be plural 'contests' to match the plural meaning. 'Fund' is a typo and should be 'fun'. 'Haven't practicing' is incorrect; it should be 'haven't practiced' to use the past participle after 'haven't'.

× I have participated in several singing contest in my neighborhood which was quite fund

✓ I have participated in several singing contests in my neighborhood which was quite fun

The noun 'contest' should be plural 'contests' because 'several' indicates more than one. Also, 'fund' is a typo and should be 'fun'.

× I haven't practicing it on my own because it helped me realize and express my emotions more freely.

✓ I haven't practiced it on my own because it helped me realize and express my emotions more freely.

After 'haven't' (have not), the verb should be in past participle form 'practiced', not the '-ing' form 'practicing'.

× So single has become a meaningful hobby for me even without professional training.

✓ So singing has become a meaningful hobby for me even without professional training.

The word 'single' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'singing', which is a gerund (noun form of a verb) and singular.

× In my close friends, there are the people who support me a lot, as singing for them would make me feel more confident and happy.

✓ Among my close friends, there are people who support me a lot, and singing for them would make me feel more confident and happy.

The phrase 'In my close friends' is incorrect; 'Among my close friends' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'there are the people' should be 'there are people' without 'the' because it refers to some people, not specific ones.

× In my close friends, there are the people who support me a lot, as singing for them would make me feel more confident and happy.

✓ Among my close friends, there are people who support me a lot, and singing for them would make me feel more confident and happy.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to a group of people; 'among' is used to indicate being part of a group.

× Well, in my opinion, stinging definitely brings happiness to people.

✓ Well, in my opinion, singing definitely brings happiness to people.

The word 'stinging' is a typo and should be 'singing' to match the context.

× Because it allows them to express their emotions and connect with others.

✓ It allows them to express their emotions and connect with others.

The sentence starting with 'Because' is a fragment and incomplete. It should be combined with the previous sentence or rewritten as a complete sentence.

× For example, I think when singing everything, when I sing with my friends or family, it creates a choice for atmosphere and have a share positive feeling.

✓ For example, I think when I sing with my friends or family, it creates a good atmosphere and shares positive feelings.

The phrase 'when singing everything' is unclear and incorrect. 'Creates a choice for atmosphere' is incorrect; it should be 'creates a good atmosphere'. 'Have a share positive feeling' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'shares positive feelings'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.