Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，存在语法和词汇错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: No, I don't like singing because I can't carry a tune and I lack confidence when singing in front of others.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达清楚学习经历和感受。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child. My primary school teacher taught me, but I still couldn't sing well, so I lacked confidence to sing in public.

제안: 回答内容混乱且语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地表达想为谁唱歌及原因，避免无关内容。

예시: Honestly, I want to sing for my mother because she has supported me through difficult times and taught me to be confident.

제안: 回答表达不清晰且词汇使用不当，建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并举例说明唱歌带来的快乐。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. For example, singing with family and friends can help relieve stress and make people feel joyful.

× I don't like saying because I can't carry too, so I.

✓ I don't like singing because I can't carry a tune, so I don't.

这里'saying'应该用动名词形式'singing'，表示喜欢或不喜欢做某事时动词用-ing形式。'carry too'应为'carry a tune'，表示能唱准音调。

× Hi, I haven't a confidence in how to saying from the my friends.

✓ I don't have confidence in singing like my friends.

'haven't a confidence'应改为'don't have confidence'，'how to saying'应为'singing'，'from the my friends'表达不清，改为'like my friends'更合适。

× When I was a child, my primary school teacher told me how to say it, but I could not carry it too.

✓ When I was a child, my primary school teacher taught me how to sing, but I could not carry a tune either.

'told me how to say it'应改为'taught me how to sing'，因为教唱歌用'teach'，'carry it too'应为'carry a tune either'。

× So that is why I didn't have much confidence in my thing scale in public.

✓ So that is why I didn't have much confidence in my singing skills in public.

'thing scale'表达错误，应为'singing skills'，表示唱歌技巧。

× To be honesty I want to send for my mother becauses that kill me a not awful the life experience and taught me how to send in the public.

✓ To be honest, I want to sing for my mother because she gave me a wonderful life experience and taught me how to sing in public.

'To be honesty'应为'To be honest'，'send'应为'sing'，'becauses that kill me a not awful the life experience'表达混乱，改为'because she gave me a wonderful life experience'更通顺。

× I think my mother likes my friends and they often do me a favor if I encountered to some.

✓ I think my mother and my friends often do me a favor if I encounter some difficulties.

句子结构混乱，'likes my friends'应为'and my friends'，'encountered to some'应为'encounter some difficulties'。

× The tough situation.

✓ tough situations.

单独的短语不完整，应与前句合并，且复数形式更合适。

× Yes, I believe we're seeing Cambrian happynest to others people such as with family members, friends and others in my openion music likes.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to other people such as family members, friends, and others. In my opinion, music is like painkillers that help me release stress and help other people.

句子中'we're seeing Cambrian happynest'错误，应为'singing can bring happiness'，'others people'应为'other people'，'openion'拼写错误，应为'opinion'，'music likes'应为'music is like'。

× Pain killers that are helpful me release the stress and how the people.

✓ Painkillers that help me release stress and help other people.

'helpful me release'应为'help me release'，'how the people'无意义，改为'help other people'更合适。