Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and providing clear supporting details. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it is my hobby. In my free time, I like to practice singing along with playing instruments like the harmonium, which helps me improve my musical skills.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using proper linking words. Avoid vague phrases and incomplete thoughts.

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in school. I took singing classes where I learned different musical notes and also performed with various instruments, which helped me develop my musical abilities.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar to improve clarity. Avoid redundancy and awkward phrasing.

예시: I prefer to sing for myself because when I am tired or stressed, singing and playing instrumental music help me relax and feel better. Therefore, I usually sing just for my own enjoyment.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it creates joyful moments that they can remember for a lifetime. For example, singing at celebrations often lifts everyone's spirits.

× Yes, I do like singing. As it's my hobby also and in free time I like to practice my.

✓ Yes, I do like singing because it's my hobby, and in my free time, I like to practice.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'As' and 'also' together and lacks proper conjunctions to connect ideas smoothly. Using 'because' clarifies the reason, and adding 'and' properly connects the two ideas.

× Physical skills like playing harmonium or playing any instrument an by singing parallelly with it.

✓ Physical skills like playing the harmonium or any instrument, and singing alongside it.

The phrase 'an by singing parallelly with it' is incorrect. 'By' is misspelled as 'an', and 'parallelly' is not commonly used. 'Alongside' is a better preposition here to indicate simultaneous action.

× Yes, when I was young in school I chose the option of singing classes and in single classes I have learned various notes in singing and had performed various instrument, instrumental, musical.

✓ Yes, when I was young in school, I chose singing classes, and in those classes, I learned various notes in singing and performed with various instruments.

The sentence mixes past simple, present perfect, and past perfect incorrectly. Consistent past tense ('learned', 'performed') fits the context. Also, 'had performed various instrument, instrumental, musical' is unclear and corrected to 'performed with various instruments'.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ For whom do you want to sing?

In formal English, 'whom' is the correct object pronoun after a preposition like 'for'. 'Who' is subject pronoun and less appropriate here.

× I would like to sing for myself as when I am tired or I'm in any stress moment I do like to sing music or I do like to play instrumental music as it helps to relax me and also come in sometime.

✓ I would like to sing for myself because when I am tired or stressed, I like to sing or play instrumental music as it helps me relax and sometimes cheers me up.

The sentence uses 'do like' unnecessarily; simple present 'like' suffices. 'In any stress moment' is incorrect; 'when I am stressed' is better. 'Come in sometime' is unclear and replaced with 'sometimes cheers me up'.

× That's why I do like to sing for myself only.

✓ That's why I like to sing only for myself.

The placement of 'only' is important; it should be placed before 'for myself' to clarify the meaning.

× Yes, at some extent I think we singing can bring happiness in the life of.

✓ Yes, to some extent, I think singing can bring happiness into people's lives.

'At some extent' should be 'to some extent'. 'We singing' is incorrect; 'singing' alone is correct here. 'In the life of' is incomplete and should be 'into people's lives'.

× Some border people as it makes that movement happy at remember able for the lifetime.

✓ Some broader people, as it makes that moment happy and memorable for a lifetime.

'Border people' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'broader people' or 'other people'. 'Movement' should be 'moment'. 'Remember able' should be 'memorable'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.