Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to correct grammar mistakes and use more natural phrasing. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax during my free time. I am especially fond of Punjabi songs, so I often sing in that language. Singing not only lifts my mood but also helps me connect with my culture.

제안: Focus on correct verb tenses and sentence structure. Make your answer clearer and more coherent by using linking words and avoiding run-on sentences.

예시: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. However, my grandmother used to sing to me when I was a child and taught me important things to remember while singing. Because of her guidance, I learned to sing on my own.

제안: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Avoid awkward phrases and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I really want to sing for my mother because she has always inspired me and loves me very much. Singing a song for her would be a special gift to show my love and appreciation.

제안: Work on sentence completeness and clarity. Use proper vocabulary and linking words to express your ideas clearly and logically.

예시: Absolutely. Singing can bring happiness because when people feel anxious or depressed, singing helps them relax their minds and calm their bodies.

× Yes, I love singing becauses it helps me relaxing my mind during my free time.

✓ Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax my mind during my free time.

The word 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. Also, 'helps me relaxing' is incorrect; after 'helps', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'relax' is correct instead of 'relaxing'.

× I have always been captivated by Punjabi song so I often singing that language.

✓ I have always been captivated by Punjabi songs so I often sing in that language.

The noun 'song' should be plural 'songs' to match the context (plural and countable). Also, 'I often singing' is incorrect; the verb should be in base form 'sing' after 'often'.

× Singing is not just only lift my mood but it also allowed me to connect with my culture.

✓ Singing not only lifts my mood but also allows me to connect with my culture.

The phrase 'not just only lift' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'not only lifts'. Also, verb tenses should be consistent: 'lifts' and 'allows' are present tense to match the subject 'Singing'.

× No, I have not ever learn how to sing but I remember my grandmother used to sing a song for me when I was a child and she used to tell me what the things that we need to remind in our mind to sing a song and that's why I sing a song by.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing but I remember my grandmother used to sing a song for me when I was a child and she used to tell me the things that we need to remember in our mind to sing a song and that's why I sing songs.

The verb 'learn' should be in past participle form 'learned' after 'have not ever'. 'Need to remind' is incorrect; it should be 'need to remember'. The sentence ending 'that's why I sing a song by' is unclear; corrected to 'that's why I sing songs' for clarity.

× I really want to sing for my mother. Because she is the lady who is always captivating me and she loved me so much. So I just want to give my mother a gift, order, compassion to sing a song for.

✓ I really want to sing for my mother because she is the lady who always captivates me and loves me so much. So I just want to give my mother a gift of love and compassion by singing a song for her.

The sentence starting with 'Because' should be connected to the previous sentence. 'Captivating me' should be 'captivates me' to match present tense. 'She loved me' should be 'she loves me' for present tense consistency. The phrase 'a gift, order, compassion' is unclear; corrected to 'a gift of love and compassion'. Added 'by singing a song for her' to complete the thought.

× Absolutely. Singing brings happiness to people because. When you. You have in ciety and depression and you want to just leave all your anxiety behind. Just go for the singing because it relax your mind and keep your body Cam.

✓ Absolutely. Singing brings happiness to people because when you have anxiety and depression and you want to leave all your anxiety behind, just go for singing because it relaxes your mind and keeps your body calm.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'You have in ciety' is a misspelling of 'anxiety'. 'It relax your mind' should be 'it relaxes your mind' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Keep your body Cam' should be 'keeps your body calm'. The sentence was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.