Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding unclear phrases. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and boosts my energy. Although I am not a trained singer, I love listening to music and singing along for fun.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear and redundant parts. Focus on directly answering the question with clear sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: No, I have never had the opportunity to learn singing formally. However, I enjoy singing casually, especially when I am alone in the shower or driving my car.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically, using simple sentences and linking words to explain your thoughts.

예시: Although I am not a good singer, I would like to sing for someone special because it can strengthen the bond between us and show my feelings.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and incomplete. Make sure your sentences are complete and coherent. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons or examples.

예시: I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps reduce stress. Since many people have hectic schedules nowadays, singing offers a joyful break and improves their mood.

× Yes, I like singing very much becauses it helps to relieve my stress and boost up my energy.

✓ Yes, I like singing very much because it helps to relieve my stress and boost up my energy.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because' to show cause and effect.

× It is the thing that enhance. 101 spirit and I don't know how to sing but I just love listening music.

✓ It is the thing that enhances my spirit, and I don't know how to sing but I just love listening to music.

The verb 'enhance' needs to be in third person singular form 'enhances' to agree with singular subject 'thing'. Also, 'listening music' requires the preposition 'to' after 'listening'.

× I just love listening music.

✓ I just love listening to music.

The verb 'listening' requires the preposition 'to' before the object 'music'.

× No, I haven't had opportunity to learn singing, but I love singing.

✓ No, I haven't had the opportunity to learn singing, but I love singing.

The phrase 'had opportunity' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'opportunity'.

× No, I haven't had opportunity to learn singing, but I love singing.

✓ No, I haven't had the opportunity to learn singing, but I love singing.

The phrase 'learn singing' is awkward; it is better to say 'learn to sing'.

× Instead of learning think singing.

✓ Instead of learning to sing.

The phrase 'learning think singing' is incorrect; it should be 'learning to sing' to express the intended meaning.

× I like to listen to music.

✓ I like to listen to music.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I love to sing when I am alone in the shower or in the car.

✓ I love to sing when I am alone in the shower or in the car.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× As I said earlier that I don't know how to sing but I want to sing for someone special which boost or a connection and it is a really good thing when good thing and good gaster to enhance between bond. For two people.

✓ As I said earlier, I don't know how to sing but I want to sing for someone special which boosts a connection, and it is a really good thing to enhance the bond between two people.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'which boost' should be 'which boosts' to agree with singular 'someone special'; 'good gaster' is unclear and likely a mistake; 'to enhance between bond' should be 'to enhance the bond between'. Also, commas are needed for clarity.

× We can't deny the fact that singing is a great idea for bringing happiness in everybody life becauses it helps to reduce these stress of everybody.

✓ We can't deny the fact that singing is a great idea for bringing happiness to everybody's life because it helps to reduce the stress of everybody.

The preposition 'in' should be 'to' in 'bringing happiness to everybody's life'. 'becauses' is incorrect; correct is 'because'. 'these stress' should be 'the stress'.

× Hectic schedule As we know today's schedule is very hectic in everybody's life.

✓ Hectic schedule. As we know, today's schedule is very hectic in everybody's life.

The sentence is fragmented; adding a period and comma improves clarity. 'everybody's life' is correct.

× So singing brings happiness in P.

✓ So singing brings happiness to people.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear; 'in P' is likely a typo and should be 'to people' to complete the thought.