Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有語法錯誤和用詞不當，建議加強基本句型結構和詞彙使用，並避免重複和不連貫的表達。可以嘗試用簡單明確的句子來表達喜歡唱歌的原因，並且注意時態和單複數。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relieve stress and makes me happy. However, I am not very good at it, so sometimes people laugh at me, which makes me a bit shy to sing in front of others.

제안: 回答中語言不流暢且有多處錯誤，建議練習簡潔明確的句子，並使用正確的語法和詞彙。可以先說明是否學過唱歌，再簡單描述學習經驗。

예시: Yes, I have learned a little singing at school. Our music teacher taught us some singing techniques and music history.

제안: 回答不夠清楚且語法錯誤多，建議用簡單句子直接回答問題，並用連接詞使句子更流暢。可以說明你喜歡為誰唱歌或為什麼喜歡獨自唱歌。

예시: I am quite shy to sing in front of others, so I prefer to sing alone. Singing by myself helps me relax and feel happy.

제안: 回答中有許多語言錯誤和不連貫的表達，建議練習用簡單且正確的句子表達意見，並用具體例子支持觀點。

예시: Definitely yes. I think singing can make people feel happy and relaxed. When I feel stressed, I listen to music and it helps me feel stronger to face my problems.

× Actually I like to sing a lot because I think the same can help me release my pressure.

✓ Actually I like singing a lot because I think the same can help me release my pressure.

The verb 'like' is commonly followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Using 'like singing' is more natural and grammatically correct than 'like to sing' in this context.

× An actually sing along for me is a kind of happy things.

✓ Actually, singing along for me is a kind of happy thing.

The phrase 'happy things' should be singular 'happy thing' because it refers to a singular concept. Also, 'sing along' should be 'singing along' to correctly use the gerund form as a noun.

× However my things go is not that good so someone have laughed at me.

✓ However, my singing is not that good so someone has laughed at me.

The subject 'my things go' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'my singing'. Also, 'someone have' is incorrect; 'someone' is singular and requires 'has'. Subject-verb agreement must be maintained.

× So after that I have a little bit scared about it.

✓ So after that, I was a little bit scared about it.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the past tense 'was' should be used instead of the present perfect 'have'. Also, 'scared' is an adjective and needs a linking verb like 'was'.

× I have I have and have a lot of chance to learn singing.

✓ I have had a lot of chances to learn singing.

The present perfect 'have had' is appropriate to express experience up to now. Also, 'chance' should be plural 'chances' to match 'a lot of'.

× I have just learned very little when our music our music teacher in Scorcho still teach are saying the RDL an some music history.

✓ I have just learned very little when our music teacher in Scorcho still taught us singing, the RDL, and some music history.

The sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Teach are saying' is incorrect; it should be 'taught us singing'. Also, 'an' should be 'and'. The past tense 'taught' fits the context.

× As I just mentioned, I'm quite shy to sing in front of people so I like I prefer to our preferred till saying just along an enjoy that time which can release my stress and just.

✓ As I just mentioned, I'm quite shy to sing in front of people, so I prefer to sing alone and enjoy that time which can release my stress and just be happy.

The sentence has pronoun and word choice errors: 'our preferred till saying just along' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'prefer to sing alone'. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed 'be happy' to finish the thought.

× Definitely yes. I think saying tempering people happenings empower when I was this pressed sometimes I'll listen to others.

✓ Definitely yes. I think singing brings people happiness and empowers them. When I am depressed, sometimes I listen to others.

'Saying tempering people happenings empower' is incorrect. It should be 'singing brings people happiness and empowers them'. Also, 'when I was this pressed' should be 'when I am depressed'. The verb forms and word choices were incorrect.

× Music, musical work and enjoy it. I'm totally sending lost sons.

✓ I listen to music and musical works and enjoy them. I'm totally singing lost songs.

The original sentence fragments are incomplete and unclear. 'I'm totally sending lost sons' is likely 'I'm totally singing lost songs'. The sentence structure was corrected for clarity.

× I feel more, I feel, I feel I cannot power to face my life.

✓ I feel stronger; I feel I have the power to face my life.

The original sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. It should express gaining strength and power to face life. The corrected sentence is clearer and grammatically correct.